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Walking with Celestials

Tác giả: Slow_Neptune
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What is Walking with Celestials

Đọc tiểu thuyết Walking with Celestials của tác giả Slow_Neptune được xuất bản trên WebNovel.Hirow, a boy fascinated with the stars, dreams of the world outside his small village. His inquisitive nature leads him to befriend an old man who believes light is evil and find a girl who has falle...

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Hirow, a boy fascinated with the stars, dreams of the world outside his small village. His inquisitive nature leads him to befriend an old man who believes light is evil and find a girl who has fallen from the stars. Laniakea, a woman in the far north fights for survival as she escapes her past. Finding a new purpose she seeks those who have taken on the curses of this world. Calder, a prince from a kingdom far to the east, is exiled by his father and seeks to reclaim the throne. Yet his search for truth and revenge in this mad world leads him down unexpected pathways. As the fate of Hirow, Laniakea, and Calder converge, the mysteries of their world are brought forth. This story will also be posted to royalroad.com

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Year 2035 A game called PokeVille has swept up the pokemon enthusiasts by waves. It is a Virtual Reality Simulation Game that focuses on pokemon breeding, researching, and grooming. It has many functions, but what attracted the players of the Pokemon VRMMORPG named Pokemon: Genesis is that, you can groom, breed, and research pokemons that you caught on the VRMMORPG. As the players knew that stronger breeds of a certain pokemon species are rare, or if you say it bluntly, nil. That is why, they dove onto pokemon research, grooming, and breeding. What's more is that, the time ratio in there is 1:5, meaning, people can spend 5 days there and only spend 1 day in the real world. The drawback is that you will lose a lot of gaming time if you didn't play for even an hour. But thanks to a young man, who is the co-creator of Pokemon: Genesis, and the sole creator of PokeVille, the problem was solved. He, by his lonesome, developed a capsule that a person can stay at all the time without feeling hunger. In fact, the person will grow more healthy as he stays inside. It is a Virtual Reality Pod that makes a person sleep. It scans the body of the person inside and registers them as the sole owner of it. The liquid that is enveloping them are nutrients that are liquefied and had a multiplied potency, enough for the body to absorb safely. The 19-year-old genius who created all of this is, of course, delighted by the good feedback he received from the users. He, himself, is playing the games that he created, breeding the most broken pokemon that has ever been seen in the game, a secret that has never been revealed. Why? Because on day 22 of July, 2035. The genius who introduced mankind to a new world, discovered a way to make a person healthy, and helped a lot of people, died. He died after saving a girl from a short-circuiting device that exploded. When he opened his eyes, he saw a bright light in front of him. There is a silhouette that can be seen hidden behind the light that said, "For a brave young man like you, who craved for adventure, who created his own world, and helped a lot of people, I have a proposal for you. Do you want to hear it?" This is the start of a journey. The journey of a person to the world of his dreams, to the land of pocket monsters! Cute pokemon that are furry? He will catch them! Strong pokemon that are still in their infantile stages!? He will train them! Mythical pokemon? They're all his! Pokemon that are talked about only in legends!? He will find them! Join Jeid Aeros in his adventure to an entirely new world of pokemon. As he meets all kinds of people and have a relaxing journey, catching all the pokemons and girls alike, that is standing in his path. Because in the end, what is the goal of a trainer who held a Pokedex in his hands? "Pokemon? I'm gonna catch 'em ALL!" (same for the girls of course!) •~•~•~•~•~• DISCLAIMER! I do not own the Pokemon franchise! This book is just a fanfic that I wrote as one of those 'what if' scenarios. Some pokemon theories of some YouTubers that I find interesting would be added here. This would be my second fanfic, and I am here to better my writing skills, grammar, and, of course, to get some feedback from you readers!

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