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The Taleweaver

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What is The Taleweaver

Đọc tiểu thuyết The Taleweaver của tác giả StenDuring được xuất bản trên WebNovel.One man to change a lifeTwo to change a worldAn outworlder comes to Otherworldwhere words come truewhere he comes trueThe TaleweaverThis is a story of mine from 2003. It's long since finished, or at l...

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One man to change a life Two to change a world An outworlder comes to Otherworld where words come true where he comes true The Taleweaver This is a story of mine from 2003. It's long since finished, or at least two out of three planned books are written. There will be no third. Now while each book is a finished story in its own right there are loose ends after book two that will never get tied together. So, dear reader, you have been warned before you decide to embark upon this journey. Gorgeous cover by Chryiss

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Orthodox Traditions: Okaku and the Nine Provinces

In the ancient Nri Kingdom, the Osuofia receives a chilling prophecy about the coming of the white man. The Osuofia is the title of the most powerful medicine man in Nri Kingdom and he believes the coming of the white man would bring about the enslavement of their people and the destruction of their traditions. More than half a century later, the incumbent Okaku, King Anozie, prepares to host the annual Iri Ji Festival and he places high hopes on his son to win the exalted astral combat contest. The Okaku is the ruler of all Nine Provinces. Unknown to him, a group of gang members plan to assassinate him and the Igwes of the Nine Provinces in the Astral Realm (which is same as the spirit world in a sense). Their plans are thwarted when they run into the Okaku’s son, Prince Zimuzo. He fights them off, together with the daughter of his father’s archenemy, who unexpectedly meets him at the place of the assassination. They form an alliance and a romantic relationship springs from their encounter. Meanwhile, Ikemba, who is a commoner from Uru Province, has been training his whole life to win the esteemed astral combat contest. Later, it is discovered the assassination may have been arranged by a woman called the Red Witch, who was banished to the evil forest some years ago. The astral combat contest ends in a tie between Prince Zimuzo and Ikemba, which upsets King Anozie and he resents his son for not emerging as the sole winner. At this time, the white man arrives with his apprentice and they are sheltered by the new head of the royal maidservants called Ijeoma. The white man is a Catholic Priest and he heals Ijeoma’s father of snake bites. Deemed as a miracle, the queen goes at night to see Ijeoma and her father, only to find the white man there. The queen seeks the help of the white man who heals her mother as well. Meanwhile, the current Osuofia detected the presence of the white man through divination and has declared him wanted in all Nine Provinces. The white man is later captured and this puts the Okaku in a bad position since his wife and her mother are responsible for hiding the white man. The Osuofia is also able to capture one of the Red Witch’s daughters and he decides to send some voyagers to journey to the land of the gods to retrieve the Oke-Ite (a mythical pot of power) as the only way to cleanse the land. Prince Zimuzo and his beloved uncle, King Anozie’s second cousin, also decide to journey with them. When they get there, the uncle, Ozo Amobi, kills Prince Zimuzo and takes the Oke-Ite for himself. It had always been his secret ambition to become Okaku of Nri Kingdom. At this time the Red Witch goes to rescue her captured daughter only to find the Osuofia has been murdered by another Dibia. She kills the evil Dibia and learns Ozo Amobi had been working with the evil Dibia all along. As fate would have it, Ikemba teams up with the Red Witch’s daughters, Amara and Amaka, to journey to the land of the gods in the Astral Realm. They realise only a blood relative can revive Prince Zimuzo and Amaka reveals she is actually a sister to both Prince Zimuzo and Ikemba, meaning they are triplets. Amaka then revives Prince Zimuzo with her unique gifts. King Anozie runs into Ozo Amobi fighting with the Red Witch and she convinces him of Ozo Amobi’s treachery. They team up to fight Ozo Amobi but King Anozie gets badly wounded. She then flees with King Anozie’s body to the evil forest to help him heal. As it turns out, King Anozie and the Red Witch were secret lovers years ago before her unjust banishment. Ozo Amobi declares himself the new Lord of Nri Kingdom and summons evil minions to aid him finish off King Anozie and the Red Witch. A huge battle ensues but King Anozie emerges victorious. He thinks he killed Ozo Amobi but Ozo Amobi escapes Nri Kingdom with the Catholic Priest’s apprentice, hoping to seek the help of other white men and their sophisticated weapons.

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NOTE THIS IS A CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK REVIEW AND PROBABLY DOES NOT RELATE TO CURRENT STATE OF NOVEL *You can always delete if you care that much about the rating* First your novel is written like a movie script. Don't do that, those are for directors, not readers and aren't fun to read. Also dont put a enter space in a quotes paragraph. End paragraph and make new quote paragraph. There was too much info dumping, you need to make it gradually appear as your world setting needs a lot. I know its easiest to do it all at once, but it makes readers want to read less like me, to be honest I can't even remember much about what I was supposed to. I would reread once more a bit slower, your spelling looks generally god so far (maybe errors in parts I didnt read), but you need to put some commas in certain places like before and (most of time it is needed there). Too much scene changes. If you change it like that you should just write it so it makes more sense and flows better for reader. We can't see what your imagining. Also don't do #, better to just - - - or . . . or _________ or ===== to split scenes. # Just weird from a thrid perspective, even if you use, it spam it. To make a line about big enough fe a phone so 20 taps ish, you dont want to forget what readers might be resding on. Describe 5 senses more, it felt 2D. Also you should work on detailing a little more, plus make more relatable things. Fourth chapter in I still have no idea whats going on other than they landed on another planet (possibly) and the story of Arthur (mightve got name wrong) Im a stop reading now as I already wrote enough, hopefully this helps.

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Just your average shameless author selfplugging his own story. Well, and collecting the daily EXP for writing a review as well. Science fantasy. Space ships and magic. Even dragons. Oh, and there's mecha as well. Any of the above central to the story? Naeh. Two men on a journey, however, is. Is this an all five star story? Hardly. Thorough editing should yield a five star writing and it's updated daily. I'll collect those. While I did give myself the other three stars as well I guess story, character and world is subjective. I don't see a reason why any of them should drop below four though.

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