The Successor of Heavenly Demon God

Your English has improved a lot, rhe concept of your story is likeable so keep at it. Just avoid making too long paragraphs as it will make the readerreaders bored and it may cause confusions. Keep up the work! :3

The writing style and quality of this novel is great. I like how detailed the characters were. This is a novel with a a great potential and I highly recommend it 👍

The writing style and concept is really great knowing it's your new experience. There's a lot of potential in this book and I can sense that this will gain a lot of success and such. Just add a short blurb to highlight the book amd hook the readers more.