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System Jazz

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The cops catch Arnim, facing an 8-year jail sentence, - or to play a VRMMO 12 hours a day. It's an easy choice: he's a 14-year-old starving loner from the slums too clever not to get taken advantage of. And this is the newest Deep Dive tech everyone talks about. Except the system is ruthless and it's impossible to tell what's real or virtual. He's more than an average noob though, fighting for survival is in his second nature. Aided by a corrupted AI and a cute girl from the yard, he finds the smartest exploits to rise through the ranks. When he uncovers the program's secret, the developers offer money and security, - or a battle he can't win. He's more careful with his pick now. Why not fight against all odds, and be free? Disclaimer: Strong language. The story is in the first person present tense.

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baandrews
baandrewsTác giảbaandrews

Hello There! This is your author speaking. What can you expect from this novel? 1, Slow Burn 2, The typical weak to strong, VRMMO, protagonist against the world type of story, but instead of the usual power creep, the story goes deeper and deeper as time passes. 3, The MC, Arnim works smarter, not harder, and won't shy away from exploits. He likes to solve everything solo, but this cheeky romantic subplot is also happening. 4, There are lots of EVE, Stalker, Minecraft, and D&D references in this fictional game, and an overcomplicated system that not even the developers understand. 5, Fun, hopefully. If you agree or disagree, please leave a review too, constructive criticism is always welcome to help me improve, and well, I don't mind the praises either! Good reading, B. A. Andrews

vorlefan
vorlefanLv3vorlefan

If you enjoy a nice first-pov story, then I'm sure to recommend this one. The main character is interesting to read his thoughts and how he perceived the word. Also, the introduction and the starting of the game is one of the turning-points that it will get you hooked in. ~ Keep up the good work :)

Nyx_the_Cat
Nyx_the_CatLv11Nyx_the_Cat

Okayyy. While I'm not a video game story lover, the book just drew me in. The way Arnim thinks, his sarcasm and witty nature made me giggle 😂 I like the way the author gave depth to his characters, both main and side. And it's only been a few chapters! It's fast paced and everything is happening at once. Superb writing with few typos .

The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

Tiết lộ người tiết lộ thông tin

bearateme_
bearateme_Lv12bearateme_

Genuinely love the synopsis, the english is good too. I love the story ideaa. DO NOT DROP THIS BOOK. Imma be back when this has more chapters

CcSupremecC
CcSupremecCLv3CcSupremecC

A beautiful novel that tackles a familiar yet intriguing topic. It has a consistent progression, though it feels a bit fast-paced, it's enjoyable to read. There may be some rookie mistakes at points, but based on the first ten chapters, I can say it's a novel worth reading. Well done to the author!

Nieton
NietonLv10Nieton

nice start, I already like the mc, though I'd say the birthday gift was great

Shadowwarrior_007
Shadowwarrior_007Lv11Shadowwarrior_007

Great story , don't read 1st person novel nor am I good at giving review, but this is good, also has potential.

Positivity_Dream
Positivity_DreamLv14Positivity_Dream

I really like the fake names of real names... lol

Lenaleia
LenaleiaLv15Lenaleia

This book deserves a few chapters of your time for sure. I can't wait to see where the author goes! His use of first person present tense is also awesome (not that I'm biased) - keep reading, you'll become Arnim before you know it!! I love a good VRMMO storyline, too!

TallGrass
TallGrassLv2TallGrass

I was beta-reading the author's previous novel and this one too, and I think going for a simple theme and sticking to a single POV helped make it more enjoyable. I like the slow-burn aspect (and spoiler, it's sloooooow-burn), the story-telling is linear, easy to follow, grounded, and the character is relatable. The world-building might be confusing initially, but give it some time as Arnim explores it slowly, and uncovers its secrets. But no spoilers here, I read it a bit further than what's been published yet...

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