Supreme-Evolution

A few spoilers, if that is an issue don't read ahead. Firstly, it is difficult to give this novel a true rating since it only has 14 chapters at the moment. I felt it necessary as a few things irked me already. There are a few spelling errors, a few grammatical issues and something that made me roll my eyes. Author, could you not have chosen a different word to call these "powers". Why did you choose the same word as My Hero Academia and call it quirks? These are genetically modified traits. There has to be something better. Then there was the issue with 18k years of history. What you covered was essentially 20-50 years of history. If you were only going to cover that much, you should have at most put them 100-300 years into the future and tell us that due to the increased intelligence by the "Quirks" allowed humanity to advance even faster. Even through these issues, I do genuinely feel there is a lot of good potential here. If you'd revisit these chapters and think hard about what I've pointed out, I'd give it 4-4.5 stars. So keep doing what you're doing, and I'm sure you'll do great. My review isn't meant to discourage you from writing, just to be more conscious of the things you put down.

So far the story is dope, wasn’t expecting the reincarnation twist, but I enjoyed it immensely, to add file to the fire he reincarnated back to earth which is rare in novels today. I actually have my interest peaked with this one, most of the new authors that come into play nowadays do the same boring sh!t, with the whole system crap. I can see this one getting big in the future and I’ll continue to read until it stops.🤧