hello guys I decided to rewrite the story
(things I will rewrite)
1. the way they speak like ("hello" said Akira )
2. some things where I made a mistake
3. the thought will be '...' this
the said will be "..." this
the system will be [...]
4. I will start rewriting tomorrow since I am always busy on Monday
5. I will slightly change some things in the plot
chapter 1-5 is finished and if the chapter's title is chapter 1 or something it means it was rewrited