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Reborn Might Guy

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What do you get if you have one of the strongest taijustu users of all time, But he is reborn into the DBZ universe? Will he become the strongest human? Will he get a system? Will Guy's full power of YOUTH be enough to go toe to toe with some of the strongest people in the universe? If you wanna find out start reading ;) This is my first novel got 0 experience in this I hope this goes well If it does enjoy if it is a little eh comment and I will see how I can improve as a author. Disclaimer: I do not own any of these Naruto/Db/DBZ /DBS and any other stuff I may or may not include

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This story is purely just didn't make sense at all. The sealed memories are fine but he should have a similar personality. With his dad a disciple of roshi he would have at least trained his son a little at the start of the fic. The main problem was however how he acted AFTER he unsealed his memories. It made no sense how it was like guy didn't know sht about fighting or training. He should already know how to breathe, how to build a foundation, how to fight etc. Overall I think the writer is new? It is a very interesting idea but VERY poor writing. Like there is no description at all, no idea how things go the way they do. It doesn't follow a lead? Like it jumps around and skips tons of sht. We missed the first 10 years of his life, like wtf? I don't think he should have had his memories sealed in the first place as it rly isn't needed. Like there is no reason why they should be... the given reason was for plot but then he doesn't know sht about dragon ball. Then you should have showed might guy growing up with a new family, his reaction, thought-process, goals, his training schedule etc. Him interacting and learning about the world around him etc. Studying this new energy etc. I feel he should be older than goku etc maybe bulmas age or older. This will give him time to grow etc. Instead of all these things, what we are given essentially is missing all of the time he was young and he instantly starts training under Roshi. It being like he doesn't know anything about martial arts with what I said before where he doesn't know how to breathe, train etc when he should. Might Guy in this story is kind of missing half of his personality and is kinda following the basic idea of him. Saying things like if I cant do this then I will do this many more constantly. It's like the Author forgot how intelligent guy acc is. Do you think he became that strong, a jonin, best martial artist in the world without any intelligence? He also lacks the solemn and wisdom of guy. It's like guy in this is basic? Hollow? The story feels like it's going in a list, he does this, he does that, he says this. It has no descriptions, explanations, thoughts, reactions etc Great story idea again but just very lacking in my opinion. Maybe because the Author is new? But yeah gl to him/her.

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