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Prototype: DO NOT READ

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"You're finally awake. Kim Min Ho" That voice... My stomach seems to turn into knots as I see his face. Standing in front of me is a male with long black hair and pale skin, wearing a hanbok and trousers, red eyes that screamed power looking at me. I try to talk but nothing comes out from my mouth and I watch his lips pull into a smirk as he bends down, now holding my chin as he says quietly "Well, this silence is uncomfortable. What? You don't know how to welcome your Prince and Betrothed anymore?" .... What in actual fuck? * Park Hoseon Woo finally gets what he has wanted, for the first time in his life. Death. But fate always has one more trick up it's sleeve. After dying, he expects to rest in peace, or move into the great beyond, as it should be. But what can do when he finds out he's somehow reincarnated to some place he has no idea of, which is bad, and is pregnant to a man who apparently does not love him or want anything with me yet still wants him together with him in marriage. Plus, he's the crown prince and he's delirious handsome. Who wouldn't want a prince when they have no idea where they are? Still, warning, this Prince seems to be nothing but darkness and pain right from the start. And Park Hoseon Woo in his new life and new name, thinks that only Redemption can save such a soul as him. And he plans on doing that. But how long can someone survive around a person who seems to suck the soul of anyone who came too close?

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1st: Needs an introduction. You don't drop out new terms like zeus pooping out new kids. 2: Some grammar errors, but overall decent 3: some weird punctuation here and there. 4: Some ideas should be extended Good start. If you feel like you don't like the story and don't feel confident, ask a friend to beta-read. There are some other smaller issues but my webnovel app keeps crashing when I leave reviews and comments so i'll keep it short. Great start tho

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