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Perspective-Golden Pupils

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Introduce: Xu Qing is the ordinary teenager of impulse of a directness this, extraordinary chance lets him have the eye of a pair of magical clairvoyance, the life that gives birth to him from now on is inconceivable change, fortune is at one's fingertips, gambling altar king appears in the sky, romantic encounter comes one after another… Protagonist: Xu Qing, male. By chance, he got the inheritance of clairvoyance divine eye. On his way to life, he used clairvoyance divine eye to get more opportunities. He learned that superpowers are not tools for personal gain, but weapons for responsibility. The female lead: Qin Bing, female, is the sister-in-law of the male lead, but in the parallel world she is high and mighty, the queen who makes people fear in their hearts.

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Chapter 1Chapter 1: Landlord Urging Rent

 Chapter 1: Landlord Urging Rent 

Summer weather is like a beautiful woman in a rage, that heat makes people dizzy, coupled with the spray of saliva, like rain on a long dry land.

 At this moment, Xu Qing was wearing a tank top and shorts. She stood at the door with her head lowered and endured the passionate saliva attack of the beautiful landlord. Even her feet seemed to be stepping on floating clouds, and her thoughts were floating in the clouds.

 The beautiful landlord was in her early thirties and looked as beautiful as a peach. She definitely belonged to the kind that was ripe and dripping.A pair of visual 34d big chest rich straight, with the fluctuation of mood slightly trembling, is seductive.

 Xu Qingwu admired the magnificent scenery opposite him. He lowered his head and tried not to spit on his face. However, he did not dare to withdraw his head. After all, he and his sister-in-law owed him two months 'rent. It was nothing wrong to be scolded. He could only be careful in a low voice.

 " Sister Zhu…" Xu Qing's throat would always feel a little choked whenever he called out these three words. It was as if he had swallowed a bunch of pig hair. He always felt something strange.However, this woman was indeed a lot older than him. It was not beneath her to call her big sister, let alone owe her rent.

 "Qingzi, don't blame Big Sister for making things difficult for you. Go ask around. Only your house can delay the rent for two months. If it weren't for the fact that you usually help Big Sister with some trivial tasks, I would have asked someone to kick you out early in the morning."The beautiful landlord surnamed Zhu was greatly pleased by this big sister, and her tone became a little softer. To be honest, she did not want to chase Xu Qing away. After all, she could still help with some 'small jobs' every month.

 Small job?" I clean the corridors of the three rented rooms every day, and I even have to change the gas and rice for you. Last time, when you had a heart attack, I carried you to the hospital. However, you didn't even have a proper thank you afterwards. You even complained that I broke my sling…" Xu Qing cursed in his heart, but he didn't dare to say anything. He lowered his head and said weakly," Sister, my sister-in-law hasn't paid yet. Can I definitely pay you on the 15th?"

 Although Xu Qing said that, he did not have the slightest confidence in his heart. He was living on his sister-in-law's monthly salary of a little over 1,000 yuan. How could he have the money to pay the rent?The exam was about to take place, and it shouldn't be a problem for Xu Qing to get into a university with her grades. However, even if she did, the high tuition fees wouldn't be covered.

 Looking at Xu Qing's gloomy expression, the beautiful landlord who had vented her anger felt an inexplicable fear in her heart. To be honest, this young man was not bad. She had a heart attack that day. If it were not for him, she might be in a square box earning incense candles and white chrysanthemums. After spraying him, her mood improved a lot. A trace of gratitude quietly surged into her heart.

 The beautiful landlord pondered for a moment and had an idea. The corners of her lips curled up. Her small dimples were especially attractive. Xu Qing's expression wavered when she saw them. She actually felt a little floating.

 "Qingzi, I know it's not easy for your sister-in-law. Why don't I help you find another job besides cleaning the stairs in the future? At least I can cover some of the expenses. If you do it well, you'll be able to pay back the rent in a month or two…"

 Xu Qing's eyes lit up as he looked at Sister Zhu intently. After listening for a while, he finally understood. It turned out that he was asked to take on all kinds of trivial tasks in the surrounding rental houses, such as changing liquefied gas, connecting sewer pipes, transporting, and even tutoring primary and secondary school students. In addition, he could repair some electrical appliances. If the price was moderate, it would be a great deal.

 The more the beautiful landlord talked, the more energetic she became. Although she was extremely fierce when she scolded people, as long as she talked about business, her vision and wisdom made people feel amazing. Together with her trembling breasts, it was even more amazing.

 The two of them stood in and out of the house for almost an hour. Xu Qing felt a little numb in his feet. Only then did he remember to bring a stool for Sister Zhu to sit on. Unexpectedly, the beautiful landlord had already sat down on the ground as soon as he turned around.

 Xu Qing turned around when he heard the commotion behind him. The expression on his face suddenly froze. He thought, Sister, can't you hold on for one minute?

 But now, the beautiful landlord had found a place to sit down. Xu Qing was stunned. He wondered if he still needed to move this stool.Just as he was hesitating, the beautiful landlord sat on the ground and cried out.

 "Qingzi, quickly come over and help Sister. Aiyo, my waist…"

 Xu Qing was stunned for a moment. He quickly went forward to help Big Sister Zhu up. Unexpectedly, he was in a mess. His palm passed through his armpit and was clasping on a soft thing. His face turned red. He quickly pulled his hand back two inches and finally helped Big Sister Zhu up.

 "Qingzi, don't break my sling again."Seeing Xu Qing blush, the beautiful landlord narrowed her eyes and teased.

 " No... this isn't something like that. I was careless..." Xu Qing blushed like a ripe tomato. He wished he could find a hole to hide in. He could only lower his head to hide his embarrassment.

 "Hehe!This matter is settled. I'll give you a PHS phone later. If there's anything alive, contact me by phone…" Beauty Zhu had scolded enough. She was even pinched for some reason. She felt as if she had eaten a little pudding in the dog days. All the pores on her body felt comfortable. The smile on her face was sweet.

 "No need!I can't afford the phone bill…" Xu Qing's mind came up with a tune, holding the PHS, standing in the wind and rain, his left hand changing to his right hand, but he couldn't get through.

 "It's fine. Big Sister will pay for it first. You can pay me back when you earn money in the future."The beautiful landlord was thinking about her own plan. The economy was in a downturn now, and there were fewer renters. There were still a lot of empty houses in the three rental buildings. If there was one more housekeeping service, there was no guarantee that the rental business would flourish. Didn't we also have a competitive advantage?

 At the thought of this, the beautiful landlord looked at Xu Qing's sturdy body and was happy. With this body, he was much stronger than those four-eyed students who were doing nothing. Look at his muscles, tsk tsk…Thinking of the chest that this young boy had pinched just now, Dan Feng's eyes unconsciously became misty.

 "This brat is also an honest man with an empty nose and a wick hidden in his stomach. That pinch just now almost ignited the fire in my heart. Sigh!What's wrong with me…" The beautiful landlord thought quietly, and a strange emotion rose in her heart. She had never felt this way since her dead husband passed away young.

 The distraught landlady gently rubbed her eyebrows with her fingers to drive away the strange emotions. Only then did she regain her calm.

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Firstly heres a few things you should take note about your synopsis. Reason why I refuse to read it and mainly why others would too Grammar and clarity: * The sentence structure is awkward and grammatically incorrect in some places. * Sentences like "fortune is at one's fingertips, gambling altar king appears in the sky, romantic encounter comes one after another…" are vague and lack focus. * The parallel world concept isn't clearly introduced or connected to the protagonist's life. **Character descriptions:** * Xu Qing's description is generic and lacks personality traits. The "clairvoyance divine eye" sounds interesting, but we need to know how it affects him and his choices. * Qin Bing's description in the parallel world raises questions but doesn't explain how she connects to the main story. Is she an antagonist or another version of the sister-in-law? Intrigue and plot: * The synopsis mentions opportunities and superpowers, but it doesn't hint at the challenges or conflicts Xu Qing might face. What obstacles will he need to overcome? * The "gambling altar king" and "romantic encounters" seem like random elements thrown in without context. How do they fit into the main narrative? Overall: The synopsis lacks a clear direction and doesn't effectively hook the reader. It gives a confusing glimpse of the story without providing enough context or motivation to dive in. Here are some suggestions for improvement: * **Focus on the core conflict:** What is the main challenge or obstacle Xu Qing will face? Use the synopsis to introduce this conflict and show how the "clairvoyance divine eye" plays a role in it. Develop the characters: Briefly showcase Xu Qing's personality and motivations. How does the eye change him? Briefly hint at Qin Bing's connection to the story, without giving away too much. Use strong verbs and imagery: Replace vague phrases with specific details that evoke curiosity and excitement. By making these changes, you can create a synopsis that effectively grabs the reader's attention and leaves them wanting more.

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