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NEW WORLD LOVE

Tác giả: Indus_Road
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What is NEW WORLD LOVE

Đọc tiểu thuyết NEW WORLD LOVE của tác giả Indus_Road được xuất bản trên WebNovel." well I was sure that I had died "He was right he had died and now he has been given a new life by his mother of all people cause she wanted grandchildren.now he is world full of ninjas, heros, yokai...

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" well I was sure that I had died " He was right he had died and now he has been given a new life by his mother of all people cause she wanted grandchildren. now he is world full of ninjas, heros, yokai, mermaid and more.

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HiddenSwordsman
HiddenSwordsmanLv13HiddenSwordsman

My biggest issue with this app not just this story is it's inability to provide proper proofreading. English is not your first language, cook that's fine, but if you are trying to serve it to English readers having proper grammar is a must. Otherwise, your story becomes a headache to read and understand. Right off the bat I had an aneurysm trying to put proper sentences together. We are given the bare minimum of a work background and the plot while in theory an interesting concept, has little to no explanation behind it. I'm sorry dear Author but this just won't do.

Manish_Rout
Manish_RoutLv2Manish_Rout

shameless review from a relative. The writing quality is alright but the story is good with a lot of elements.

Indus_Road
Indus_RoadTác giảIndus_Road

a shameless review from the author .but I hope you all enjoy my book .

Raphis
RaphisLv3Raphis

Alright, everything is great, from character introductions, settings, and events. The way you create your own world and system is all neatly organized. Kirin's nature is also quite calm and not impulsive. Your only shortcoming lies in the titles; I don't know if you intentionally gave those titles or lacked other ideas, but try to come up with more engaging ones.

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