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My Life belongs to you

Tác giả: shrishthi
Romance
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Đọc tiểu thuyết My Life belongs to you của tác giả shrishthi được xuất bản trên WebNovel.THE STORY OF A GIRL WHO NEEDS TO SLOW DOWN. TO FIND HERSELF AND TO FALL IN LOVE.Riya is a simple girl. She helps her father in his business and makes everyone happy with her work.She chases many hurdl...

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THE STORY OF A GIRL WHO NEEDS TO SLOW DOWN. TO FIND HERSELF AND TO FALL IN LOVE. Riya is a simple girl. She helps her father in his business and makes everyone happy with her work. She chases many hurdles in her life and she was so tired of accepting it. She finally leaves for London to complete her masters. One day she meets a gentleman. He helps her and understands Her. But gradually, she falls in love with him and also to shake off her depression and thinks to restart her life.Does life plans something else? Ben, A gentleman whom Riya loved was a friend in her childhood but soon everything becomes blank with her. Will, she ever discover the truth? Will Riya's old life ever catch up with her? And if does...will she accepts it again? FIND OUT. Author: shrishthi The Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12560562706908505

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I GO TO KOREA TO FIND MY FATHER BUT I FOUND A LOVE (TAGLISH)

SI YEJIN KIM AY ISANG HALF FILIPINO AND HALF KOREAN NA NAGPUNTA SA KOREA PARA HANAPIN ANG KANYANG AMA NA BUMALIK SA KOREA AT DI NA NAGPAKITANG MULI. NGUNIT NABAGO ANG PLANO NANG MAKLALA NYA SI CHOSEON NAM TURN OUT NA ANG IDOL PALA NYANG SI CHAE JANG JOON. DAHIL SA ISANG MISUNDERSTANDING NAPAGKAMALAN SYA NITONG GIRL FRIEND NI CHOSEON. KAYA IMINUNGKAHI NI CHOSEON NA SIYA AY MAGTRABAHO SA KANYA MUNA BILANG ISANG KATULONG PUMAYAG NAMAN ITO KESA NASABAHAY LANG SYA NG ATE NYA AT TUTAL WALA PA NAMAN SYANG PINAGKUKUNAN NG INCOME. NGUNIT SADYANG ANG KAPALARAN AY MAPAGBIRO DAHIL SA ISANG PANGYAYARI "NAHULOG SYA SA HAGDAN AT NASAMBOT NI CHOSEON" THAT TIME DI RIN SINASADYANG MAKUNAN NG CAMERA "NAKAON PALA AT TUMAPAT SA KANILA", TAPOS ANG FEMALE LEAD AY NAPABALITANG BUNTIS THAT TIME THEY NEED A FEMALE TO BE LEADING LADY AND THEY DECIDES THAT YEJIN WILL BE DAHIL SA PAGKAHULOG LANG NG HAGDAN...SIMULA NOON NABAGO NA ANG TAKBO NG BUHAY NI YEJIN. AT DAHIL DIN SA PAGDATING NI YEJIN NAGING UPSIDE DOWN ANG BUHAY NI CHOSEON. MGA TAUHAN... FL~YEJIN KIM-DAE GIWU/ YEOJA1BABAE2GIRL3 ML~BAEK JANGMUL/ CHOSEON NAM/ CHAE JANG JOON-LEE JOON GI INA: LORAINE DIAMANTE 56 yrs old + AMA: KIM JINHYUK 60 yrs old = KIM YEJIN ANAK NI LORAINE... OSAKA HANA 30 yrs old F BUMKEZER AL ALI 28 yrs old M ADI KUMAR 26 yrs old M IRISH UNDERZON 24 yrs old F KIM YEJIN 22 yrs old F ANAK NI KIM JINHYUK SA KOREA KIM JINNA 22 yrs old F KIM HAEBYEOL 21 yrs old F KIM DABYEOL 20 yrs old M KIM DARIM 19 yrs old M ASAWA SA KOREA: KWON JISYA 56 yrs old KIM YEJIN'S GRANDFATHER IN KOREA: KIM NAMSEOL 70 IN PHILIPPINES: MARTIN A. DIAMANTE 75 GRANDMOTHER IN KOREA: WON SEOLHWA 69 IN PHILIPPINES: ANISYA L. BERNARDO 74 NAM CHOSEON PARENTS BAEK WANGJI DEAD 36 yrs old~car accident GU HANNA DEAD 34 yrs old~suicide REAL NAME: BAEK JANGMUL 39 yrs old M BAEK JANGSEOL~DEAD DIE BECAUSE OF ALLERGY IN GINSENG, 5 YEARS OLDER THAN JANGMUL AND 12 YEARS OLDER THAN JANGWOOL. BAEK JANGWOOL 32 YRS OLD~THE ONLY BIOLOGICAL FAMILY OF JANGMUL HE LIVES WITH CHAE ORIGINAL SONS IT MEANS NOT SONS OF MISTRESS. (CHAE DAECHANG 35 YRS OLD AND CHAE DAEJEON 29 YRS OLD) POSTER PARENTS... NAM NAMPYEONG 63 yrs old M JIN HAERI 59 yrs old F POSTER SIBLINGS NAM JOONIM 27 yrs old M NAM SANJO 30 yrs old M NAM KAESEOL 21 yrs old F ASSISTANT: GU RYUNG-OH 50 yrs old FRIENDS YEJIN'S FRIENDS LUCILLE A. BRIZE 27 F MERCER V. ANTONOVICH 23 M BRIANEL E. MASAY 34 M ANNATALIA M. ROSARIO 30 F JANA H. MAGAYON 21 F LEILA S. SANTIAGO 25 F CHOSEON FRIENDS DAE RYEHWANG 30 yrs old F KANG HAERYUK 26 yrs old F NINE 42 yrs old M HAN BONGHEE 35 yrs old M FOREIGN POWERS BOOM (BUMKEZER) 28yrs old M ZECK 23yrs old M XIAOBAO 25 yrs old M DRAVE 26 years old M EX3M SANJO NAM~ANAK NG MAY-ARI NG STEC 30 yrs old M ZANDRE 30 yrs old XUEMING 31 yrs old BAEK ANHO BAEK SOOKANG F~FEMALE M~MALE STORY 2

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Sudheeksha
SudheekshaLv2Sudheeksha

Pls update soon ... Story is interesting.... wanna know what happens next Atleast update one two chapter a week so that u will get more reviews ...

Chryiss
ChryissLv5Chryiss

I have to be very honest. The writing is understandable, but it lacks in execution. It doesn’t nearly have enough visual language to get a sense of the settings or characters. Capitalization, punctuation, and paragraphing are real issues. The events happen quickly without detail, and the events that do happen don’t add to the plot of man and woman falls in love and encounters troubles. Do we really need to know how she makes supper and goes to sleep? Don’t lost every day actions. Skip what isn’t necessary to move the relationship forward, and elaborate on the couple’s experiences, thoughts, and emotions. I think you’ll get there as you have a sound idea, but this story will take some work to get to that fully engaging and compelling story. Keep it up!

Nightmare_Taichou
Nightmare_TaichouLv4Nightmare_Taichou

First and foremost, the ideas of the story is there, but the problem lies with the execution. The earlier chapters were a bit off for me, but you got better as the book progressed. But please, review these earlier chapters because it may deter prospective readers. But all in all, the plot is interesting. Just fix what needs to be and your story will great. Good luck!

UnliMegane
UnliMeganeLv4UnliMegane

The ideas are there, but the execution needs some polish. Particularly, the grammar. I don't want to sound like a grammar Nazi or anything, but sufficiently good grammar can contribute immensely to the reading experience and help your novel get some more attention. I suggest getting someone to proof read for you. But you're doing great so far. Keep at it. Great job girl.

Xincerely
XincerelyLv13Xincerely

I like the idea of the story about the girl being send to her grandparents' house and then meeting the guy, but it's not really my kind of novel lol There are a good handful of grammar mistakes in the story, especially with capitalization and word-spacing, but you're a new author, so I completely understand that ^~^ One thing I definitely recommend changing would be the lack of descriptions in the story. The chapters are pretty short, and there's only 1-2 sentences each paragraph. It's a lot of speaking, not showing. I would love to see more descriptions between her interactions and not the brief summary of it (occasional is fine, but not when the entire story is like that). Overall, it's a pretty interesting story that most romance-novel readers will enjoy~

NEidarous
NEidarousLv4NEidarous

Great work author, as a beginner you created good story so far. The grammatical and spelling problem was a little off for me but if you review it again and fix this problem the story will be much better.

GabrielDetchans
GabrielDetchansLv4GabrielDetchans

This is a beginner author that I want to encourage so I will be lenient in this review! The story is nice and is understandable even if the grammar and the spelling need to be fixed. The story advance quickly and there is enough conflics with family and friends to make the novel interesting . This novel has potential to growth! Give it a try to encourage a begginer Author! A few tips to the Author: Use metaphores to show the characters feelings. Learn to use dialog tags. Re-read your work and fix grammar and spelling before updating.You can do it! Keep up the good work!

Shashikanth4488
Shashikanth4488Lv1Shashikanth4488

May be it's ur first attempt but u done it with the perfection and u achieved these appreciation from all over ! I know u worked hard fr these and ur capable of dng more!! All the best fr future writings

fantasy_land
fantasy_landLv5fantasy_land

Although story is great and you are off to a good start, just try to correct the grammatical errors. The more you write, the more you improve. Also, in my opinion you should somewhat compact the synopsis a bit, it is too detailing. Other than these, the character development and background is good. Continue writing and you will definitely improve. Kudos!

Vorie
VorieLv12Vorie

It has a good storyline and the beginning of a cute love story. It will be interesting to see how they will meet again. Keep working at it, and you could make this story even better. There are a lot of grammar errors, and you told too much as opposed to showing. Showing helps me as a reader to experience the story, especially important moments or emotions. Overall it was good.

PoppyQueen
PoppyQueenLv4PoppyQueen

Dear author, your story is nice and I really like it. As far as the grammar is concerned, you can use sites such as Hemmingway editor, Grammarly, etc.I really look forward to read more of the story.Keep writing. Best of luck!

bitterlouise
bitterlouiseLv5bitterlouise

Hi dear author! Your story is great. Though there are grammatical errors but it does not really affect the flow of the story. I suggest that you proofread your work and don't lose hope. Continue writing you're doing just great😊

great_gamer
great_gamerLv5great_gamer

over all i love your story. i wouldn't mind if chapters are longer. it is good story. i cant wait for more chapters! i hope weekly release rate too!

NatsumeRikka
NatsumeRikkaLv5NatsumeRikka

I like ur story, the concept is interesting no doubt about it. Just improve the grammar and edit the mistakes. If u can't do it urself, then find an editor. I'll give a review again once the story develops and their romance begins. Up till then, best of luck author. I'll add ur book to my lib. U've another reader now🤗

MishaK
MishaKLv13MishaK

Your story is very cute. I think the only thing you need is slight editing. Other than that I really liked the plot. Keep updating and keep up the good work!

anne_2
anne_2Lv5anne_2

hi dear author I read your work, so far it's good, light and refreshing but i have some issues on your grammar although i'm not professional in grammar too and wanted to correct you to improved more. and i added yours to my lib. so additional readers right?? hehehe well good luck and more power

M_T
M_TLv4M_T

Honestly , you need to spend more time editing the story . your story is about romance , so less world building and more character depth . when using names (riya) should always be Riya capital the first letter of the word , also about travailing aboard part, it an important point don't try to put it in a few word , describe her grandparent her home , her felling . I like the idea , and the environment around the MC will make things interesting , but I will like it less if the love interest is attracted to the MC without reason , and lastly remember that they are ***** and got high degree of education , so they won't simply 'fall in love ' .

tingxiao0514
tingxiao0514Lv3tingxiao0514

What should we do for a mass release? I really can't wait for tye next chapter. I really love this novel. Thank you author for translating this novel.

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