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My Group Chat Across the Multiverse

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Đọc tiểu thuyết My Group Chat Across the Multiverse của tác giả MisterRE được xuất bản trên WebNovel.My Group Chat Across the MultiverseHome World- Seven Deadly Sins----He reincarnated in the world as the demon king's son?!What is going to happen?----Second ficStill very inexperienced so don't beat m...

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My Group Chat Across the Multiverse Home World- Seven Deadly Sins ---- He reincarnated in the world as the demon king's son?! What is going to happen? ---- Second fic Still very inexperienced so don't beat me up on that. ------ Group Chat Idk about harem or non harem ---- Just Read!

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和机长大人官宣了

原来恪爷罩,现在机长宠。 官宣?小事!官宣时间?不重要,盖过上次炒CP的火热就行。官宣词?机长是草莓味的?三毫米?喵系...小夏同学盯着发布会上男人正经的禁欲模样百思不得良配,毕竟自己的爱情一波三折。果然,最后几分钟,男人挑了个后排的记者,那人红着脸问,“请问我们人气最高的机长有..有..女朋友吗?”潜台词,去你家航空公司上班还来得及吗? 男人抬表看了一眼,笑着看向镜头,“三分钟之后,你们就应该知道了,夏汪汪?我们说好的哦,草莓糖我都买好了。”台下一阵哗然,高岭之花笑出了酒窝,瞬间变奶狗了?穿制服打领带还从怀里掏出了草莓糖?小夏同学白了一眼屏幕里那张脸,认命的戳下了发送键。 儿时男孩是她的欢喜。简称,恪爷罩着你。顶着山大的压力磕了几年正经青梅竹马,一拍两散。 几年后,微博上和当红一线明星,炒CP炒的火热小夏同学在剧组焦头烂额改剧本,不经意扫过橘灯下一个黑影,转头就看见他一身帅气笔直的机长服,放下黑皮箱,提着几个打包盒,懒懒地走到她跟前,嘟着嘴撒娇:“汪汪,我想你了。” 小夏同学白了那人一眼,每次长时间不见都装小兽,用苦肉计,但怎么办每次都中招,轻轻蹭了蹭男孩的鼻尖,“我也是。”

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MisterRE
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I have much to work on. I need advice to make my fic better so I can make it more enjoyable for the readers and myself. Let’s start with the biggest problem. MC’s personality. I can understand that MC has a childish personality for a 170 year old demon and that was my mistake. I admit that The grammar is decent in my opinion. Definitely not perfect or amazingly good but you can understand it even with mistake here and there The MC being weak is because of a curse. I did that since I didn’t want to make him so OP right off the bat since the SDS world is a strong one. I wanted to make it more enjoyable than being a typical overpowered right off the bat group chat story Right now there is only 14 chapters so there is a lot that I can change to make it better. I just ask for your patience and advice for my story

Pythia
PythiaLv2Pythia

Main character is insufferable and moronically stupid. How can you live for 170 years as a demon in their culture and world and not kill things because you were once a human teenager. As well as the fact he only starts to realise danger is around him 170 years later and only when he gets the chat group (which is very awkward and weird to read. Almost like the author has no social skills at all and in inserting himself as the main character) His personality is incredibly annoying along with his mannerisms, i can see why every single demon alive shuns him. Humans would shun such an annoying man-child too before putting him in an asylum for the mentally ill. This has good potential to be an enjoyable story to read ruined by a socially awkward loser main character. Spelling and grammar is decent but the style the author writes in is very blocky and holds the narratives progression.

leo26
leo26Lv11leo26

It's just an annoying read, A 170 year old demon with being the brother of meliodas and is super weak which makes no sense since the demon king is his father and on top of that I guess his mentality also didn't change in almost 2 centuries of living, Like I said, it's just not a fun read.

timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1timeawayfromstress

he is very naive and stupid. There is no logic and seriousness in the novel. You trust too quickly and you think the people of the world are stupid. You think the clan chief's child in the world of Hanabi does not know the education he received there and the darkness of the ninja world is ridiculous. mc does not use his brain.

Sole_on_fire
Sole_on_fireLv1Sole_on_fire

The MC is stupid, a fuvkin moron! And I dont get how the fuvk does he get away without getting beat up other demons especially if he is so weak. He should have been treated more harshly by his kind. Strong rules the weak, especially for demons... The fact that he grew so naive is just way to stupid... And honestly, I dont see how he will make meliodas the same as canon... That kind of development needs more than just a proper childhood... I would have expected that Meliodas would fuvkin wreck him and scorn him for being weak, trample all over him.

BrightFullMoon
BrightFullMoonLv1BrightFullMoon

Love it, hope you do not drop it :D. I like the MC and the bit more unusual choice of chat group members, to be fair, i was a bit surprised, since i see the same three everytime, but not here, at least not yet XD

Blue_Torch
Blue_TorchLv7Blue_Torch

too many character that make it difficult to interact each other and the result author can only skip his chat with other character, and sometime they become transparent. the beginning is good, but after he get his cheat, its become boring. i think there is no need instantly give him cure for his curse and invite 4 people, because I read those grup chat from akikan, his side character also get transparent.

ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4ObamaUchiha

i predict with all the losers begging for a harem just because its a multiverse fanfic that the author will cave in, so this is my prefire review

AllHailBritannia
AllHailBritanniaLv5AllHailBritannia

I really like to read this kind of story. It always leaves me in a state of constant anticipation. Please don't drop this story. I wanna see how it will develop in the future.

Flame_Force77
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Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv4Kaito_Uzumaki

Trash Literal Trash

OXCL
OXCLLv3OXCL

I SEE YOU'RE PLANNING TO MAKE HORI A HEROINE, IT'S VERY INTERESTING, AND I HOPE IT'S JUST ONE HEROINE, HIGHLY RECOMMENDED, BUT THE MC IS QUITE WEAK, I HOPE HE WILL GET STRONGER

Estrenger_HK
Estrenger_HKLv1Estrenger_HK

Hmmm maybe you ofende the fans of wunxia novel lol you novel is + or - not good more is no trash If you get more experiencie on make novels you can this novel in top 3 good novels

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Ali_Makles
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Smol_frog
Smol_frogLv11Smol_frog

It's rlly good, I can't wait for more to come out. - ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Kirito_Kirigaia
Kirito_KirigaiaLv4Kirito_Kirigaia

It has potential with time it will turn into a captivating fanfic truly it is worthy of my attention.You amuse me. and As i like to say !!!!!!Cookie Lover Out!!!!!!

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