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My Alpha's Fairytale

Tác giả: Kim Black
Fantasy Romance
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Đọc tiểu thuyết My Alpha's Fairytale của tác giả Kim Black được xuất bản trên WebNovel.Slave. A word I've been hearing for the past 10 years that I have completely forgot what my real name was. My money driven parents sold me to the Alpha of the New moon pack when I was only 10 in retur...

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Slave. A word I've been hearing for the past 10 years that I have completely forgot what my real name was. My money driven parents sold me to the Alpha of the New moon pack when I was only 10 in return for a large sum of money. I was nothing but a worthless human who never had her first shift and I was kicked to the lowest of the low, beaten, worked to death and cursed all day. Losing all hope in life, something still made me want to hang on a little while longer. I can feel my chest warm up with fire and I pray to God that I'm not being delirious.

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　　玩个火影版的传奇而已，为什么一眼醒来就到了木叶。 　　对，木叶的木，木叶的叶。 　　李子木很郁闷。 　　不是太子党，没有背景，路人甲的面板怎么办？关键是不能学忍术是什么鬼？ 　　不过这个打怪升级是怎么回事？ 　　7级小火球，12级抗拒火环。。。。还有这个英雄模板，一种三流手游的即视感。 　　没办法,那就升级吧。 　　长门：“神罗天征。”李子木：“抗拒火环”。 　　大蛇丸：“秽土转生。”李子木：“圣言术，专克不死系”。 　　自来也：“仙人模式。”李子木：“我有内功哦”。 　　宇智波斑：“天碍震星。”李子木：“流星火雨。” 　　宇智波带土：“神威”李子木：。。

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So, I did enjoy some elements of this book such as not too much profanity, clean sexual romance, and playfulness. A fair YA read. Eva was an interesting character (a bit creepy at times but still an intriguing character). However, what made this book just OKAY/mediocre was the fact that there was way too many grammar/typo issues to overlook. Almost every sentence and every paragraph needs MAJOR editing. Sometimes, I had to guess at what was being said, which interrupted the flow of the sentence/passage. Poor grammar can ruin a good book. Example: Eva’s character spoke to another character calling them a “dump b*t*h” instead of “dumb b*t*h”

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This book was great.. I truly enjoyed it and would love a continuation of the story. I believe the story was left open enough to continue on.

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Good storyline. A bit of superfluous detail that didn't improve the story. Some poor sentence structure and horrible spelling. Sadly, enough to make reading difficult and awkward reading. Still readable with persistence. Writer, recommend proofreading and editing to improve content and reader's experience for improved marketing. Definitely worth the time and effort. More readers equals more profitability equals more money in your wallet.

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I enjoyed this book and the storyline a whole lot. It was very moving in some places and cute in others. My only issue is that the ending felt rushed and up in the air to me.

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this is a good story which would be better if some of the sentences were understandable and not jumbled. I would have scored higher if not for this

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