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Journey Of A Legend

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[ON HIATUS!] Please read my new book Cultivation Through Artifacts! ----------------------------------------------- "Would you make a deal with a Soul for power and glory? To become the best? The Supreme? But with huge consequences and struggle? After knowing that death is all the time behind you or that no one will remember of you after you succeed? After knowing what terrible things awaits you, would accept the offer?" ----------------------------------------------- "One day Altars with strange stones in it appeared all around the world. After humans realized the roles of these stones, people with unique powers started to appear one after another and the world started to change in a rapid pace. To make it worse dimension zones appeared out of nowhere on different points of earth with creatures like demons, devils, fairys, spirits, sacred animals or monsters in it. Slaying these creatures humans started to gain bigger and bigger power until Godhood and Immortality was not a dream anymore. However as time went by, strangly, no one could become a god nor an immortal..." ----------------------------------------------- This is a story, where a boy named Greg, whose life was always at the bottom and was filled with struggle and loneliness, suddenly changes, because of an unknown fate. "If God comes to stop me, I will surpass God! If heaven is about to collapse, I will be the one to support it and if my destiny is set in stone, I will change my fate! That's how I think it should be and that's how you should too." Come and follow our legend on his journey as he surpasses everything and anything on his way! Come and watch as he steadily reaches the top and uncover the unknown mystery behind his destiny! -----------------------------------‐----------- If you like Gods, Demons, Monsters and different kinds of creatures, with a main character, which breaks through every obstacle, then I think this is your book. However, this is not the common face slapping, super genius MC as you always read. No. This is something much more special, so you need patience:) _-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- Author's thought This is very first novel that I try to build up to be great, so if you have anything that you don't like please feel free and write me on discord. Also, after every 500 ps, I will post an extra chapter!! My discord server: https://discord.gg/p226Y6vQ -------------------------------------------- *The Book Cover is not mine. Credit goes to the owner and if its needed I will take it down!*

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This story does have potential. But there are some problems that I find. If the author reads these hopefully he can answer some of my question that I have. For the record I am caught up to the latest chapter and will continue reading for sure. For the Writing Quality theres alot of grammatical errors and misspelled words that do need to be fixed. English might not be their first language and that's totally cool but theres alot that need to be updated. Story Development is interesting but it feels like a train with no brakes. Very fast paced. This isn't a bad thing but keep in mind that your Character Development bbn and World Building could suffer from the pace your setting. You arent even 100 Chapters in and it feels like he already God level. I believe the story would benefit more if there more time spent on him training his and other powers so we understand everyone's power level. This goes hand in hand with Character Design. Everyone feels flat. Secrecy is good but we know next to nothing about the MCs friend or Best Friend. Nor do we know why William is the way he is. Emma seems to be the classic soft hearted healer. She, in my opinion could be more of a personality or just different. Alice is also very flat so far. Is she suppose to be a companion? is she just a glorified assistant? I have a feeling that she could be so much more, such as taking the initiative and using her animal forms. The MC himself also need a bit more design. Especially when is comes to his background and the World background in general. What happened to his parents and family? What is his motivation to obtain power? What about him makes him be worthy to obtain a Pure Soul? Not to mention this Acedemy. Is it special? How is the MC able to go to a Acedemy even though hes an orphan? The back ground need a lot more fleshing out. Such as the the Countries on Earth. What is the Federation? What's the big deal about the 5 Great Families? What's society and the Government like? What role does the Association play in the Government? Where is the setting of the story? US? Europe? Asia? Or because of how the Calamities changed the landscape, is there even any old Governments left? I feel like so far that the story is sprinting on and not pausing the look at the scenery.

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