So, a pretty good novel in terms of the story, it's reminiscent of a lot of manga tropes, but it has a lot of flaws.
1. Writing Quality: This is honestly the worst part of the novel, as the writing quality is unfortunately extremely subpar. I mean, it's readable, but that's about the upper limit. There are just a lot of mistakes like: sudden tense change, capital letters in the middle of a sentence, and a lot of failed writing conventions. Some of the good things about the writing quality is that it's really gripping, and the descriptions are amazingly well worded, and just completely blew me away out how novel they were. But still, as I am a stickler for good grammar, this is unfortunately a 3 star for me.
2. Stability of Updates: I really can't say anything about it yet as it's a fairly new novel right now, so a solid 4 stars.
3. Story Development: The story development is honestly the best part of the story here. The story flows really well even though the grammar is bad. I don't know how the author did it, but the story is still prominent, and makes you want to read more, making you unable to stop reading it. Absolutely amazing work on the pacing her author. An easy 5 stars.
4. Character Design: Honestly, I don't like the main character. I'm probably gonna get cancelled for this, but, like, the MC is a lot like Naruto or the MC of Black Clover who I don't even remember the name of, basically, loud and obnoxious, and he's also a chunni. Take this, and combine it with the luck to get into perverted situations like the MC of To Love Ru, we get a completely childish character that's starts to get really annoying after a while. The only reason I gave this a 4 star is because the MC is only 14 years old, and this needs to be taken into account too, but, if an MC like the Black Clover MC X To Love Ru MC is not your cup of tea, then I wouldn't recommend reading this novel.
5. World Background: The world background is a lot like if Tokyo Ghoul was met with High School DxD and then blended into Beyond the Boundary. And well, this creates a pretty good world actually, but there's no uniqueness to it yet, it seems like just the Tokyo Ghoul world if you look at its bare bones, its foundations. So, it's another 4 stars.
Overall, this is a pretty good novel and I think that it would get better as the author grows in the future. But, as any author is an author, I must say, good job author! And thank you for all your hard work and dedication to the art of sharing your ideas to the world!
