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Fallen Guardian : The last Shadow

Tác giả: Deep_Diver
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What is Fallen Guardian : The last Shadow

Đọc tiểu thuyết Fallen Guardian : The last Shadow của tác giả Deep_Diver được xuất bản trên WebNovel."I will make sure that they can't follow you. Run as fast and far as you can, don't look back and brace for impact when you hear it.. ""You see...the problem is, I don't go back on my words." He said ...

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"I will make sure that they can't follow you. Run as fast and far as you can, don't look back and brace for impact when you hear it.. " "You see...the problem is, I don't go back on my words." He said in a high pitched tone, only god knows who he was speaking to. He lifted his sword and started striking the space in front of him fiercely, every strike left a glowing scar in the space around him. One could say that he was dancing with his sword. But it was a dance that courted death. "Now go back to sleep ARNUS EDIOS..!!!" The scars in the space around him reformed into a dark energy circle. It was an energy circle that no would dare to summon. He knew he would almost certainly die, but he had to do what had to be done, fulfil his vows. "Take my Sword and if it isn't enough take my life..." He said without an inch of concern for his life. He mustered all his energy one last time, every nook of his energy. He recalled everything that happened in his life. "Shadow Blood Seal...!!!" He released all his energy into the seal in one instance. The seal sucked in all the energy in an instant and there lasted a moment of peace in the air. The seal released enormous amount of dark energy that covered a great radius around it, even a Rank-S Protector would tremble in such a sight. It sucked in everything living which used darkness to live around it, sealing one of the seven demon kings, Second DEMON KING - ARNUS EDIOS and his army back in the underworld. A great crowd braced for impact as The Shadow, One of the Seven Guardians has instructed them to, every single person knelt in his honour, assuming that he was no more...But was he really no more..

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Well.. Kinda boring with the typical writing out there gonna try something new .. Maybe this is my answer.. From the hipotesis its looking good with prolog like that and maybe we'll meet some surprise in this novel..

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A overall really worthwhile, addictive read, it has really fascinating characters and a interesting background, and world. Plus the grammar is good, which is the problem with some other writers. I really enjoyed reading this, keep up the good work!

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Interesting story with potential. However, I would recommend more details to help with the world building. The majority of the content is dialog and it would help to have some non-dialog to describe a clearer picture of the interactions between characters. Keep up the good work author!

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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

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Good starting effort. Keep up the good work man. I look forward to reading and supporting a fellow budding author! Lets work on our art together!

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I like how you writ the story and all but your way of telling what is happening doesn’t seem to I don’t know capture it all and it seems like you are leading up to a tragic end

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