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Extra's Death Evasion

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What is Extra's Death Evasion

Đọc tiểu thuyết Extra's Death Evasion của tác giả Imperialus được xuất bản trên WebNovel.What is an extra?An unknown character in a novel that has no mention or involvement in the plotline whatsoever. “A few thousand people died due to this horrible tragedy.”With these few lines of words,...

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What is an extra? An unknown character in a novel that has no mention or involvement in the plotline whatsoever. “A few thousand people died due to this horrible tragedy.” With these few lines of words, people or in actuality, extras simply die. There simply is no consequences to kill off some random person when they have nothing to do with the plot. This is the dilemma the author proposed to me. Should I just sit here and wait for my inevitable fate of dying? No. I can't sit here doing nothing to stop the avalanche that is to come. I need to change that unchangeable fate of mine and turn into something that can be changed. Change fate into destiny. The author said to me, “To prevent your death as an extra, you must first become something more than an extra like a side character or a main character and to achieve that, you must be relevant to the story at all costs.” [The setting of the novel is set in the 1910s with radio, blimps and everything. However, it's just related to the architecture and technologies. Not the way of thinking, common sense or everyday speech.] * * * Chapter release schedule: Inconsistent. Basically means I may release like seven chapters all at once and then never release a chapter for several decades. This novel is extremely inspired by a novel called: “The Demon Prince goes to the Academy”

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HashDaze
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I haven't read all of the chapters so I'm terribly sorry if there are any mistakes. Here are my PERSONAL review, Writing style: The writing style is descriptive and engaging, with a good balance of dialogue and narration. The author effectively uses imagery to convey a sense of atmosphere and setting. However, there are some inconsistencies in the tone and pacing of the story. Plot development: The plot is intriguing and unique, with a clear premise and a sense of mystery and tension. The author effectively builds suspense and raises questions about the nature of reality and the nature of the protagonist's situation. However, some parts of the story feel rushed or underdeveloped. Character development: The main character is well-developed and relatable, with clear motivations and a sense of agency. The author effectively uses dialogue and internal monologue to reveal the character's thoughts and feelings. However, some of the other characters feel underdeveloped and lack depth, which can make it difficult for readers to fully engage with the story. Use of language: The author effectively uses descriptive language to create a sense of atmosphere and setting. However, there are some inconsistencies in the use of language, with some sentences feeling clunky or awkward. Additionally, the author sometimes uses overly complex vocabulary, which can make it difficult for some readers to fully understand the story. Inconsistencies or areas for improvement: As mentioned before, there are some inconsistencies in the tone and pacing of the story, which may make it difficult for readers to fully engage with the story. Additionally, some parts of the story feel rushed or underdeveloped, the author also sometimes uses overly complex vocabulary, which can make it difficult for some readers to fully understand the story. Character Design: The character design is relatively basic. The main character's thoughts and actions are clearly conveyed, but there is not much detail given about their physical appearance or background. The other characters, such as the prankster and the author, are also not well-developed in terms of their character design. Their motivations and personalities are not fully fleshed out, making it difficult for readers to connect with them or understand their actions. Additionally, the background characters are not given much attention at all and are mostly used as props to move the plot forward. The character design could use more development in order to make the characters more relatable and interesting. The world background is not fully developed, maybe it's because I haven't read it all. It is mentioned that the story takes place in a dormitory, and there are references to a "Planetary System" with six planets, but there is not much detail provided about the setting and its history. The use of technology, such as telephones, is also not fully explained in the context of the world. It would be beneficial for the author to provide more information about the setting and its rules to create a more immersive reading experience. Overall, the story has a unique premise and intriguing plot, but could benefit from more consistent pacing and development of secondary characters. The author has a strong descriptive writing style but could benefit from improving the use of language. I'm no professional novel writer or reviewer but I think this is all I can say.

Imperialus
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Author here. If you do happen to stumble upon this novel, please do read it and give me feedback about the novel. Readers are a crucial part of the novel since in the novel, the world is a novel and there will be (obviously not real) readers that comment on the novel which would allow the protagonist to follow their advice/ideas in order to survive certain arcs. It will be a hassle to implement but I want real Webnovel readers to become part of the novel's storyline. Anyways, that's basically it.

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