Dragon Ratio

I like what you're writing. The MC trying to prove himself in the world. I hope you publish more chapters soon! Can't wait. Good luck with your amazing piece.

As a part of my new honest review swap policy, I will not hold back. This novel is based in a magical universe where people can have summons and cast spells. The story's protagonist is an ostracized boy who is the son of a hero. He is looked down upon by others for using his father's name to get his position. Honestly since the story is just beginning, this is all that has been established. Surely as the story progresses we'll see more characters, get more backstory for the MC and it'll get more interesting. Unfortunately the grammar is this novel is not good at all. Although the author uses the correct words which is a very important aspect of writing, the tenses are all over the place. And this pattern repeats to the point that it can be painful to read. This novel has a lot of potential and if the author wants to genuinely make this novel succeed they'd have to fix the grammar. That is my advice to the author and I hope they'll take figure something out.

I felt confused at first but later it is so interesting.. As author said strong ones always crushes the weaker one.. I hope rayn will become a strong man and will carry his father's legacy

It's one of the good fantasy story. And I love the title. The plot development is really nice. Good starts. And keep going. Expecting more chapters.

Im not a WN reader about games and stuff, so Im completely oblivious in this genre, but I could say this piece has some potentials. Okay the first chapters were kinda fun to read, I think it will garner more attention from LN readers in this genre. I cant yet judge Raynes personality based on what he just did, I think there are still more to him than just your usual protag. Since he was somewhat unpredictable that he lashed out against Vana, but I think he has some reasons, which Im willing to see. The bullying parts was kinda of cliche, but it was still fun to read, so that one was okay for me. The refeerees and the other school officials should have stopped it though. But that samurai guy i think who stepped in was also a good move. The only flaw currently is the writing style, it still needs some details and polishing. But its only a minor problem which I hope the author can fix. The dialogues should be compressed (as I mentioned in the comment) and dont be shy to add, he said or she said, because I had hard time guessing who was talking. There are also scenes which are only dialogies without he said or she said, so I was lost in that part. But regardless, despite the writing style its still good. Just some minor tweaking author.

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