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Dragon Evolution System

Tác giả: PotatoGodofTime
Eastern Fantasy
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What is Dragon Evolution System

Đọc tiểu thuyết Dragon Evolution System của tác giả PotatoGodofTime được xuất bản trên WebNovel.In the world of cultivation where the strong eat the weak. Our protagonist being born from a common snake linage was doomed to be the weakest of the weakest of the cultivation world until he/she was g...

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In the world of cultivation where the strong eat the weak. Our protagonist being born from a common snake linage was doomed to be the weakest of the weakest of the cultivation world until he/she was gifted a gift from who know where a System... Watch as how our protagonist grow and evolve from the weakest being in the cultivation world to one of the strongest by using the dragon evolution system! Dialga? Palkai? White fatalis? Bahamut? Death wing? Don’t worry we have all of those! And even more! Also pls go to www.https:/howtokillpresidentdonald duckfor100boostedbonobosandhowtoget toplastic5inlolin1daydafaqimdoing?evenidontknkwlol... This is a real website up there people...please support me...also 3/5 chapters per week...

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Nagbihis naku Kasi may Laban ako ngayun sa arena" 'Pagkatapos Kung mag bihis ay umalis naku syempre d mawawala Ang lollipop ko" D ako lumalaban Ng walang lollipop sa bibig.' 'Pagkadating ko ay naghiyawan agad sila Kasi pag ako Ang lumaban patayan talaga bawal Kang mabuhay Kung ako Ang kalaban mo" Woah nandyan na Ang queen" Go queen kill them" Patayin sila" Mga sari saring hiyawan.! "PLEASE WELCOME THE RANK 6 THE DEATH GIRLS" sigaw Ng mc." Pumasok na sila at kumaway pa.! 'Booo kumaway na kayu huling araw nyu natu." 'Last wish nyu rank 6.? 'Mga hiyawan Nila" And the other side"! "PLEASE WELCOME THE DANGEROUS CHILDISH QUEEN" Pagkasabi Ng mc ay pumunta naku sa gitna.! go queen kill them" Woah childish Lang malakas"! "SO EVERYONE PLEASE THE BATTLE BIGEN" BANG BANG" Nagsimula na kaming mag Laban".! Any last wish childish' queen.? D ko nalang sa pinansin" Nag simula na silang umatake.! Mabilis Ang BAWAT galaw ko" 'And then boom ubos pugot lahat Ng ulo Nila" Woahh walang pinagbago" ' SO THE WINNER IS NO OTHER THAN MISS DANGEROUS CHILDISH" umalis naku dun at dumiretso sa bahay; Pagkadating ko sa bahay ay nag halfbath naku at natulog" And everything went black.! "Kringg kringg tunog Ng alarm clock ko Kaya bumangon naku" "Maligo naku at bumaba.! mag Isa Lang ako sa bahay Kasi Wala nakung magulang ayaw Kung kumuha Ng maid dagdag palamunin Lang mga Yan" Kuripot Kasi ako hihihi" Tapoz nakung kumain" "Hmm Anu Kaya magandang gawin ngayun" Sembreak Kasi Kaya walang pasok.! May naisip naku try ko kaya." "Lumabas ako Ng bahay  kakanta ako" "Ng mga chismosa Kung kapit bahay" O diba Ang ganda uso ngayun Yan ei" Kumuha naku Ng michrophone' at speaker at lumabas naku" Ahemmm" Mga chismosa Kung kapitbahay" kanya. Ko MGA kapitbahay Kung chismosa" NASA kabilang kalsada Ang mga Tao Kaya tatawid ako hihi" "Mga chismosa Kung kapitbahay" Kanta ko habang tumatawid'" Mga chismosa Kung d Kuna natapos Ang kanta ko.! May truck na paparating d agad ako nakagalaw" Peep" peep' Tingnan ko Lang Ang 10weelers truck papunta sa kinatatayuan ko" Bogghhs" Wala akong sakit na nararamdaman Ramdam ko nalang ay Ang umaagos na likido sa ulo ko" Putcha Wala to sa Plano ko huhuh Ito naba Ang ganti Ng mga kapitbahay ko" yawa kayu huhuhu.!! Bbye world hello satanas huhuh

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PervyHermit
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WARNING:DROPPED.... DO NOT READ GRAMMAR SUCKED AND WHEN IT GOT INTERESTING, IT GOT DROPPED(read chapter chapter 12 first)... YOU'VE BEEN WARNED!!!

Frytrix
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You Should start using full words instead of slaughtering them with (pls, ppl) and so forth. It will attract more readers if you add 2% more work to it.

Shakin_Bacon
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I agree with the first review in the sense that the language used should be correct English, rather than abbreviations. However, the story development is quite solid and the character design is well written. The world building could use some work but overall, congratulations if this is your first novel!

WanDongDong
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Writing quality 2 star Stability update 3 star Story development 4 star Character design 4 star World background 5 star Ignore the writing quality, everything else is great. If this author can get an editor to help him, surely the story will be rated highly. I am not complaining but as a reader and author, I agree that grammar is important to relay the emotion of the story. So I have to be honest with my rating. The author is gradually improving but still need editor to help edit the chapters starting from the very beginning. Author seems like he has no intention of changing the acronyms into full words for example the synopsis remained the same, the author used pls instead of please and ppl instead of people. Please do change this dear author because as someone who is just recovering from dyslexia like me will have hard time to read your novel. We were taught to spell out to understand the meaning of the words so please do spell everything out.

SwiftBlizz
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Man your English is A.I.D.S man... Level: Millennial (lazy in school) So don't put stuff that has nothing to do with the story into the chapters. And ffs decide the gender of your character by yourself, without all this spineless voting crap!

Night_Bloodfallen
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it's really weird and I don't quite understand what the author is going for. In certain novals I have read it have women who harm men by castration, and it normally is funny. however this noval uses it to much to the point it is disgusting.

PeerlessDragon
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Lord_haden
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Cant even say how many disapointing things i saw in this novel but i know for shure the writer was a dickhead god damn (no im not beeing hard on the guy just look what he did to the mc) he even ****ed up his luck and made a nasty piece of **** system than i swear half the people who read this crap will whant to stab the system and the autor in the "little brother and heavenly marbles" gosh what a waste of time

Zakrpa
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sloth_lord
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I didn't read it yet but just from looking at how the author writing many other novel beside this it was either mean he have too many ideas and will drop many of his novel along the way or he have patient and see it to the end, but the chance of the latter was almost nonexistence

RoiRed
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Very good, I look forward to the continuation. But I also think that : I think that the interaction of the MC with other Race (Man / creature having the inteliggence) (to do it between clan / organistation, to give him objectives, to make him leave in the adventure, to visit cities, regions constituting a world ...) can give a different dimension to this novel, and also avoid the stereotype of the MC non-human staying in a place without a real world or goal became very quickly boring

HellDragon
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Great work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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AN0LCHEMIST
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Pretty good for anybody who enjoys system novels. I know I do. Overall the grammar is pretty flimsy, but otherwise it is a very well-written plot and storyline. It feels like the Systme novel with lin feng in it. W H A T T H E H E L L I S W I T H T H E R E V I E W C O U N T

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DaethRavan
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Is this novel Droped????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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SpookyRed
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I really like the story and the premise, but the writing can improve. Not really sure how this "original story" think works, but I can try to help you (With grammar e.t.c) if you want.

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