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Doomed without you

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Contemporary Romance
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What is Doomed without you

Đọc tiểu thuyết Doomed without you của tác giả Author_Promise được xuất bản trên WebNovel.She was just a girl who yearned for love and her family, but fate had it's own plans for her...

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She was just a girl who yearned for love and her family, but fate had it's own plans for her

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I love this kind of stories it's my type I'm so excited to read more

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1. First of all there isn't a proper cover. You haven't even wrote synopsis which means it doesn't gave any idea about your book.2. There are no inverted coma around the dialogues. No proper paragraph. Not even any explanation of the dialogue who is saying and what he/she was doing when saying those dialogues.3. The starting wasn't understandable. And also the chapter words count should be at 1000 to 1500 words.4. There is not even a proper background.

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First of all the story is interesting though I occasionally read romance genere. But this book is really awesome. But I wanna suggest some things to writer. Cover and Syonpsis try to add a splendid cover and a synopsis those two would definitely benefit you. Other thing is there were no comma or indications between dialogues it seem like it goes on with the narration or might get mistaken with someone else's dialogue so make sure to use comma between dialogues so it will look more organised and won't get mixed with narration. Apart from this the writing and creation is enjoyable really good one keep writing Author.

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