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Doomed without you

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Contemporary Romance
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Đọc tiểu thuyết Doomed without you của tác giả Author_Promise được xuất bản trên WebNovel.She was just a girl who yearned for love and her family, but fate had it's own plans for her...

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She was just a girl who yearned for love and her family, but fate had it's own plans for her

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I was running, running away from the place that I loathe so much. how can they treat me like this? I am an Evans, I will soon rule this kingdom that I dont want to rule... So why don't they just accept me? Now that my grandpa is dead, I don't know what to do anymore.. I don't know how to react anymore I just want some comfort... some love... why don't they give me that? why can't they give me that? I wish my parents were here, I wish they are still alive to be with me... I cried and whine while i ran, letting my vampire speed get work up. I don't know where I'm going, I don't even know where I am, but I don't care, I just want to get away, I want to get away really bad. I came to a stop at a man suddenly appearing in front of me, he's golden eyes locking in to mine. Shock run down my spine as an odf sensation and different emotions that I couldn't identify flooded in my mind. I could also smell him, he smell like a forest with a crisp of flowers, lilac and roses maybe? His smell is really addicting. The feelings were different with chester but also similar, I think I'm going crazy.  My eyes look at his beautiful red hair, they look so smooth that I wanted to touch it. Then realization hit me Mate! The words made my mind jump in delight. I finally found my mate, I had finally found him! I tried to put away my burden and face the only one that could be with me.. He's the only one left.. I eyed him curiously as I wipe my tears, simply tucking my hair behind my ears while never leaving my eyes on him. I blush nervously "I.... I'm..." Dammit! I couldn't even say my name! I look at him, swallowing the lump on my throat before I tried again "I'm.... Shey---!" I stared at his running image in disbelief What the hell? why is he running away from me? what did I do wrong this time?

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Pleasure Series#1: Love you

Disero was too bored. He was forced to go to the school for the orientation. Having this school was his idea but he doesn't like to go to those boring orientation. All of those workers there can handle it. But of course, he got no choices but to go. "Kirke, drive." He said with his cold blank expression. "Disero, I'm not your fucking assistant. You moron." He replied and showed his middle finger. They both hopped in the car and Disero' phone beeped. A group requesting a video call, he answered it. "Goodluck to that boring fucking orientation, Disero!" A loud noise almost echoed inside the car. Disero showed his middle finger and those men were just chuckling. They were Disero' friends. Their group called the PLEASURE SQUAD. They finally arrived at the front of the school. Boredom was almost eating him alive but a human being caught his attention. The man was standing while his bag was on the top of his head, Disero shrugged and chuckled because of the man's cuteness. The uniform of this school really suits the man. Disero's eyes couldn't take of on him. He opened the window and another man went to the student. "Dhaxzy Convel!" A loud man shouted. All of their eyes settled on him while the man's face that Disero admire became red. Because of shyness. He shook his head and smiled secretly. "Oi? Stop staring, that student will melt if he was an ice cream. Idiot." Disero glared at him and doesn't say anything. •What would happen if this guy— Saicki Disero fell inlove with his commoner? What will he do if he accidentally burst those brutal and harsh words even tho he doesn't mean it?• Now, let's meet him together with his squad. A/N: This is my first story. English is not my first language so bear with me. I hope you enjoy this story. Happy reading!

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I love this kind of stories it's my type I'm so excited to read more

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1. First of all there isn't a proper cover. You haven't even wrote synopsis which means it doesn't gave any idea about your book.2. There are no inverted coma around the dialogues. No proper paragraph. Not even any explanation of the dialogue who is saying and what he/she was doing when saying those dialogues.3. The starting wasn't understandable. And also the chapter words count should be at 1000 to 1500 words.4. There is not even a proper background.

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First of all the story is interesting though I occasionally read romance genere. But this book is really awesome. But I wanna suggest some things to writer. Cover and Syonpsis try to add a splendid cover and a synopsis those two would definitely benefit you. Other thing is there were no comma or indications between dialogues it seem like it goes on with the narration or might get mistaken with someone else's dialogue so make sure to use comma between dialogues so it will look more organised and won't get mixed with narration. Apart from this the writing and creation is enjoyable really good one keep writing Author.

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