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Disturbed Umbra

Tác giả: BurningHeretic
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Ozul reincarnated as a Disturbed Umbra, a monster at the bottom of the food chain. Will he keep his humanity, or fight against his former species? Ozul found himself encircled by boulders in a massive cavern. Dozens of shadowy wisps like creatures floated all around. It reminded him of looking into an aquarium and seeing the encaged fish swimming along in their depressed existence. "Well, this doesn’t look promising," Ozul thought as his excitement was crushed. He tried running his fingers through his hair but came to a horrifying realization. “What the hell?! Where are my arms?!” he screamed. A sudden nauseating feeling washed over him, his body felt wrong and distorted. Shocked, Ozul froze and thought, "I’m not human!" Taking a deep breath, he peered down, and terror filled him. He looked similar to the creatures flying overhead. He had sections of darkened ribcage sticking out of a ghostly black body. He had no arms or legs, and everything was shadowy and shifting like a slow-moving current.

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MITCHIEWilliams
MITCHIEWilliamsLv4MITCHIEWilliams

This is a unique take on the dystopian world story. The world-building is wonderful, the author did a wonderful job in plotting the story. I was hooked from chapter 1, the descriptions did that. Looking forward to more chapters.

The_Baby_Girl
The_Baby_GirlLv1The_Baby_Girl

Great world building. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story takes Ozul. There are a ton of different directions the story could go, so there's potential for this to have many chapters before it ends. I'm interested in learning about the other creatures Ozul will run into and how he'll deal with the challenges of his new world :)

Henrie99
Henrie99Lv11Henrie99

I've been really enjoying this story and the character development. Ozul's decisions seem realistic for his circumstances. The fights scenes are to the point and describe really well.

Radish_Pie
Radish_PieLv1Radish_Pie

I’ve really enjoyed the 10 chapters that are available so far and I cannot wait for the author to add more. I especially like the pace of the writing as it’s slow enough to explain what’s happening, but fast enough to keep you enthralled and wanting more! The world building is excellent! I’m excited to know what happens next with the psychological development of Ozul the main character. I see strife and hardship but all to get to a goal of a deeper meaning of his human and other dimensional life form. Excellent first novel from this author!

Jolan_Hildebrandt
Jolan_HildebrandtLv1Jolan_Hildebrandt

wow you spend a lot of time on set up, which I appreciate to a point. I think you could afford to be more efficient with your words. The long paragraphs repeat ideas and are unnecessary. Comb through the chapters and trim the fat from your work and it will be more enjoyable to read

Uzowei_Tehillah
Uzowei_TehillahLv3Uzowei_Tehillah

love the way this story is going and the plot and character development is great I'm definitely adding this book to my library, keep up the good work author❤️

BurningHeretic
BurningHereticTác giảBurningHeretic

Hi it's me, the author Writing this story is a blast and I have big plans for Ozul's future. I love reading everyone's comments and reviews, it keeps me motivated! This is my first Webnovel so if you have any constructive criticism please let me know! I am always improving my writing style so it'll change a bit as the story progresses. Thanks for all the support!

RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Lv4RomanceFanatic028

It was an enjoyable read. I like reading anything that's related to horror and let me tell you, the plot is very thrilling. So far i am liking Ozul's character that's why i would love to keep reading. [img=update][img=update]

Ramirys
RamirysLv13Ramirys

So far this looks like a very interesting and good novel. It is a fresh concept as you don't really see non human characters often on webnovel.

Themerryberry
ThemerryberryLv1Themerryberry

I love this, there’s a new twist every chapter and I’m really excited to see where the MC goes with his development and skills and just his overall personality too.

TheGoronRuby
TheGoronRubyLv1TheGoronRuby

I can't wait to read more. This is a great story and the writing style makes it easy to understanding and visualize the story. The protagonist Ozul has definitely gotten himself into some interesting situations that are well written

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