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Dawn of the First Emperor

Tác giả: Trajann_Augustus
Fantasy
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What is Dawn of the First Emperor

Đọc tiểu thuyết Dawn of the First Emperor của tác giả Trajann_Augustus được xuất bản trên WebNovel.A man named John Akton was on an expedition until something unforseen had unfolded. Lurking in the dusty ruins of the Naqsh-e Rustam where the actual burial of Cyrus' prize possession; He's golden sta...

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A man named John Akton was on an expedition until something unforseen had unfolded. Lurking in the dusty ruins of the Naqsh-e Rustam where the actual burial of Cyrus' prize possession; He's golden staff. Upon entering the catacomb, they met someone who inhabitated the old ruin. Her name was Estir Anamita, the Archmagos of Cyrus and his personal priestess. Before he could do anything he was suddenly transmigrated along with Melissa Stone, one of his companions. The world they are traveling through is... Korsan.

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