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Dark Hope

Tác giả: Hiva_11
Magical Realism
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Đọc tiểu thuyết Dark Hope của tác giả Hiva_11 được xuất bản trên WebNovel.This story about 15 year old boy capri. He is the one weak in magic and his life filled with mysterious, love, revenge, sister - brother bond, reincarnation. He possess lighting & Thunder magic powe...

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This story about 15 year old boy capri. He is the one weak in magic and his life filled with mysterious, love, revenge, sister - brother bond, reincarnation. He possess lighting & Thunder magic power. The world fullfill with magic, the magic everything to the world. There have a different types of magic level. Level 01 - Normal magic Level 02 - Super magic Level 03 - Ultimate magic Level 04 - Ellite magic (or) Dark magic Level 05 - God magic power Following Main Characters are Capri - Hero of this story Cancy- Capri Sister Joy - Capri father Jason & jerryna - capri close friend Hoody - jerryna father Yathri - senior guardian Sky - senior guardian

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Second Life as the Sister of a Goddess

He had lived a good life. A man who traveled the world, saw the cultures, learned the languages. For a period, he had even discovered a historical preservation of a martial art practiced by the Samuri and Ninja in Japan that caught his interest. He learned it until he had attained a level of mastery worthy to instruct those back in his home in the United States. Before he settled down to become a teacher, he first became a nurse. It was too late to go through the intense schooling to become a doctor, but he had been inspired by the Indian and Chinese traditions of the strong link between the ways of healing and the ways of body mastery that are the core of the martial arts. He settled down and had his family, opened his school, and taught several students. It was a good life, his 60 years. But then, when he had finished the children’s class one day in which his own grandaughter was a student, he decided to take her for icecream. That was when it all went wrong. He was fine after the accident. His grandaughter… was not. In that moment, someone claiming to be a fallen goddess promised him the ability to take the consequences of his mistake entirely onto himself. He would die, his grandaughter would live on in perfect health. In this moment of weakness, he could not possibly refuse. The last thing he knew in his life was that his precious granddaughter had been saved. The first thing he knew in his next life was that he was in the womb, and he was a twin. A twin he would later discover was the very goddess who helped him to save his granddaughter. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This series is also posted on Scribble Hub, which is its original home. This site's version is currently way behind, but I am working to fix that. If you would like to read the rest of the series right now, please check me out over on Scribble Hub. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/16995/second-life-as-the-sister-of-a-goddess/ This series does not use patreon, but is supported on Subscribe Star (one of their competitors) instead. If you would like to support this series, please support there. You can find my page at the link below https://www.subscribestar.com/jemini-s-stories

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lighting
lightingLv2lighting

Honestly man your story plot was interesting. I really like the joy and capri character. I think there more sereet about capri.Now i can add your story in my reading list.keep writing.

WWFire
WWFireLv4WWFire

One question, are you writing a novel or are you screenwriting? None of the chapters you write can be said as a "novel" or a "webnovel" per se. Please, please, please do a research on how to write a proper novel from the beginning: the dialogues, how to properly world build, how to write proper description, etc. Heck, read the top novel here and you will know that you don't actually write one. Okay, let's just say that screenwriting is your intention, your syntax and grammar is plain trainwreck: punctuation, too much use of ellipses, capitalization. I don't know why people gave you such high rating, this might be one of the worse novel I ever reviewed here. How dare you even use emojis just because you can't describe things. Last but not least, fix half-as*ed synopsis. Just seeing it makes wondered if you write this seriously or when you are drunk.

lynerparel
lynerparelLv14lynerparel

The story itself feels like it could be quite interesting, but since this, is a fantasy and it only has thirteen chapters there is so much more potential for the future characters making the story even more interesting. The Mc is likable which is a plus since I've been reading some questionable mc's is other stories.

Norah_Koch
Norah_KochLv5Norah_Koch

Interesting story with potential. I like the haunting tone. Mc is starting a new magical journey. I am hooked so far. Continue writing, author :)

Kamlyn
KamlynLv14Kamlyn

Story is interesting. I read only few chapters yet and it got me hooked. The only thing I want to suggest to author is that, if you add the synopsis then it will get easier for readers to choose your story. Because every story need a synopsis and I can't find any. Even if to keep the story a mystery , try to add something to let the readers know about story. Otherwise story is good. 😀👍

RandomGuy
RandomGuyLv4RandomGuy

Hai! I wanna say that your story is great! Keep up with the good work, author! 😊 Btw I make a story too and it would be kind of u if u can check it out and give some reviews and stars in there too 😊 My story : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14901475106138705

Empress_Ai
Empress_AiLv3Empress_Ai

I finish reading this one, the story is good but it do have a grammatical error which is not that bad. The chapter is not that much but overall it is awesome.. Keep up the good work and have a nice evening or day.. I don't know..

dark_Vision
dark_VisionLv3dark_Vision

Story plot was too good, Waiting for the true power of capri,Just need to improve the Grammatical error. Story until last episode Simply awesome.

mhhsolwei
mhhsolweiLv1mhhsolwei

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact Estrella_ringdom@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

FallenButterfly
FallenButterflyLv10FallenButterfly

The story itself is quite interesting, it is still early stages of the story so there is still a lot of potential to grow and broaden. I don't usually read magical realism but you have a good story in mind. Just a suggestion, make your synopsis as though you are catching a fish with your hook because most readers rely on that :) Goodluck! Keep writing!

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