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Celestials journey

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Đọc tiểu thuyết Celestials journey của tác giả Etiger789 được xuất bản trên WebNovel.A normal human finds himself reborn as the universe's child.This novel is based in the the pocket hunting dimension universe....

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A normal human finds himself reborn as the universe's child. This novel is based in the the pocket hunting dimension universe.

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Nanianne , the low key rich girl is an orphan and has been mistreated ever since her aunt adopted her after her mother's death. She still bares with her aunt in order to get back her mother's insurance to further her education and continue a peaceful life without any greedy aunt on her tails. But who would've thought, right before getting her hands on the money , her aunt decides to end her life , only to wake up in an authentic place with intricate carvings on the bright white shinny walls and she come face to face with a handsome face. A scary handsome face. *** " Eat. " A plate filled with fruits and a cup of milk is placed in front of her. The command is so strict coming out of the prince's mouth. But who said she would listen , perhaps it's time to show these 'illiterates' that she is not some sacrificial lamb to be fattened and killed. "I won't eat." she pushes the plate away from her and turns her back on the prince. " You think you have a choice? You are a sacrifice given by the gods and I have to fatten you up for the upcoming sacrifice." he pushes the plate back before her and commands , " Now eat!" " Fuck your sacrifice! " she says as she throws the plate on the ground and glares at him only for her heart to flutter when notices the prince's heated gaze. She steps back as he advances towards her , sprouting three words that sealed her fate to him forever. " I gladly will. "

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Suzuha_Yuu
Suzuha_YuuLv5Suzuha_Yuu

-the chapter have a lot of spelling error -POV is not focus on MC on the 6 chapters -overpower skills and weapon -girls on the novel is easy to fall in love -stats are already high on the beggining of story -the chapter is short -this novel is like more focus on getting girls -the eternal youth like body of the past life of the MC [its good but need a lot of spelling error cleaning]

KoryuHotshot
KoryuHotshotLv5KoryuHotshot

I would like to know where the heck is the plot of your story. I only read about the original from Bell's P.O.V. and sometimes the f@cklife of the O.C. There is no M.c. here only Bell.

dorkw2010
dorkw2010Lv13dorkw2010

I like the character design but the storyline if there is and it mostly with bell which dude I get this is fan fiction but come on most people care for our mc and how he does and for original connection with bell not same as the manga and show like dude it like you don't care and I got to force myself to read through it because I know there potential here and I know you could make a good story out of this if not than ask for help with other writer to proof read your story and draw a plot please

fatjesus1993
fatjesus1993Lv14fatjesus1993

This story has an OC in it, however as you read further it is still mainly a Bell focused novel. Which makes it impractical to read seeing as 90% of this book seems to be copy and pasted. I would not recommend reading this book.

ivan_Espinosa
ivan_EspinosaLv4ivan_Espinosa

Me gusta la historia, mejora la escritura y centra mas la historia en el Mc pero igual me gusta sigue con el buen trabajo .......................................................................................................................................................

Crizix_1543
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Etiger789
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ice_devil_slayer87
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le roman est super !!! merci pour les chapitres !! impatient de lire la suite vous faite du bon travail ne laisser pas tomber! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KingGrizzly
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I don't know what to say except that it seems like it's meant for people that wanna read ****ty harem stories. There are broken sentences and from what the other reviews have said, it looks like it focuses only on Bell for most of the story and only mentions the OC from time to time. I doubt it's good but I have only read the first chapter and this is only my first impression of the story. Nothing so far has made me want to continue reading. Other readers should give it a shot, but since I have read so many harem stories most of them start to just merge together unless they actually have a plot and this one just merged with the rest of the other ****ty harems.

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