webnovel

BLUE FLAMES

Tác giả: Kirigaya_22
Fantasy
Đang thực hiện · 10.6K Lượt xem
  • 31 ch
    Nội dung
  • số lượng người đọc
  • N/A
    HỖ TRỢ

What is BLUE FLAMES

Đọc tiểu thuyết BLUE FLAMES của tác giả Kirigaya_22 được xuất bản trên WebNovel....

Tóm tắt

Thẻ
2 thẻ
Bạn cũng có thể thích

số lượng người đọc

  • Đánh giá xếp hạng tổng thể
  • Chất lượng bài viết
  • Cập nhật độ ổn định
  • Phát triển câu chuyện
  • Thiết kế nhân vật
  • Bối cảnh thế giới
Các đánh giá
đã thích
Mới nhất
shacochan
shacochanLv13shacochan

Review for a read until chapter 8. I will never understand the appeal of systems for readers nor what motivates authors to purposefully go against the core of story writing. Putting Grammer and my bias aside, there are unsalvageable mistakes that makes the read unpleasant. The prologue is not catchy at all. It simply follows the bland current of a river mechanically that I can't fathom to understand. It's too normal, too peaceful, too nothing. I want something exci ING or thought provoking that makes we want to read the next chapter, ignoring the small scale of them. The characters are, well, I can't give my opinion on them because I wasn't given the chance to meet them. Who is the Mc and why am I following him in the journey? Not a shred of personality, monologue or otherwise. It makes or breaks a story. The world is never described. Vague mentions of them aren't enough. Making them too detailed is undeniably tedious and unnecessary, I understand, but a middle ground must be found else leave the readers confused. What does the magic school look like, is it hogwards like or modern campus like? What is the buses color, the street, is the sky normal or is green light the norm? I have no idea because they were never briefly touched on. The pace needs to be be slowed down with these corrections. I hope you get better at writing.

HỖ TRỢ

Về tác phẩm

Báo cáo