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after breakup, becoming a rich man's son

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After being left by his girlfriend, the decline of his career, and being thrown out of the rental house, his mother suddenly said that their family is very rich! You are rich man's son.

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“LET’S BEGIN THE SURVIVAL GAME!” The announcement called out before Allen could get a handle on the circumstances. He was thrust into a game of survival. It was supposed to be a typical day for Allen, but if only that were possible. Unfortunately, fate had different plans for him. Allen was consistently prepared to leave for school. It was part of his routine that he never broke. But, much to his dismay, he didn’t know he wasn’t coming home that night. Upon his arrival, all the students were forced to stay at school. They were asked to complete simple tasks without notice. At first, they were asked to accomplish the duties just as menial as solving a riddle, but oblivious to the peril they were about to enter. Soon it turned out that Fifty students from various places were kidnapped and erased from records and placed on a deserted island. After realizing their situations, it was clear, the only way to survive was to complete the given tasks. Just like the working world of real life, everyone has to face the consequences of their actions. Just like that, they all have to face the consequences for every wrong decision and incompetent result. Will Allen be able to come out of this? Or will he be trapped in the game for eternity? ----- Hey there, since this is my first novel there might be slight mistakes. If you can ignore those mistakes then I really think you will enjoy the novel. I will constantly be trying to improve. Join the Discord Server for Character Design. Discord ID/ Link- Adrian_Garcia#7798 Discord Link- https://discord.gg/nTwCPPszM3 Instagram ID- ce._.two The cover isn't mine.

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Nux_Leander_2794
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mc has some tendencies to get face slapped every charecter comes and insults him calling him trash,poor boy and so on but our mc in return is polite and does not reveal his identity of anyone saw him driving an expensive car he will say it rented . And he buys his previous company and works as an normal manager not as the owner seriously reading this my frustration levels have gone damn up by this brainless mc..

Red_Purple_Hearts
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So far so good. It's not giving a 5-stars review most because of small mistakes like not closing the dialogus tags. While this isn't a big deal, it's is distracting to me. Everything else is going perfectly well. It's enjoying it so far. The mc being hell-bent on suppressing the guy who his girlfriend left him for is funny. Please keep it up! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Waqas_Ahmed_5553
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does mc like beingface slapped that much ? i know he wanted to hide his identity bus isnt it too much like working as lowest employee in your own company telling your friend its a rented car when its actually your own car like what the hell even if you are teaching the peaple lesson they still dont know that you are the one teaching them lesson. worst mc

Alexander_Kings
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is MC a Maso. like does he like getting abused and later slap face this is the worst novel I ever read

Shehu_Adam
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Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?

I_am_truck_kun
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Not really to my liking. It's just like a typical chinese face-slapping story with our day dream fantasies mixed in. Also the writing needs some real improvement.

Red_Purple_Hearts
Red_Purple_HeartsLv3Red_Purple_Hearts

My second review since we've crossed 50 chapters. Good job, author. There has been a lot of development since my last review. The writing got better, little to no mistakes or missing dialogues tags. Thank you, author. The story is progressing smoothly and everything makes sense so far. Well, mostly everything. (A little bit of spoiler ahead) We're yet to see the MCs's parents or his supposed fiance. Main while he's in a, I'm going to say, complicated relationship with another girl, Lina. While they have not developed past friendship, I hope it stays that way till we at least meet the fiance and settle all that. The reason I'm not giving a 5-stars is because: 1 - The MC parents are pretty much unimportant up till now and hes's been spending their money for a while now. 2 - MC keeps spending money for no good resason. For a guy who has had it tough, I expected him to be a bit more tame in his spending. 3 - The whole fiance and Lina situation is not sitting well with me at all. 4 - I don't like Linas's father, whatever his name was... Lucas? I'm not sure. Besides all that, this is a great read with a surprising lot of free chapters so you won't lose anything by giving it a chance. Looking forward to my next review once we reach chapter 100. Keep it up, author[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

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