--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------So yesterday I got my first review...with around one star.
BRUUUUH.
But that guy also said some useful stuff and because of that I changed the first two chapters a little bit, but it should be an improvement.
Anyway, because of your massive support and the 9 Powerstones, enjoy your 2 chapters.
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Acedia walked to the door right now and turned around the sign and closed his pub for today. After Gon that little nonpaying fu-, Nah he is a minor not gonna f-bomb a minor, left the pub nobody else arrived. So Acedia closed the store and went into his office. He was pretty sleepy, which is weird because since getting his PP he didn't feel any fatigue anymore, so he conjured a bed out of nothingness lay down conjured a nice blanket, and started sleeping.
The moment he closed his eyes he stood in a place that could only be described as literal hell. Lava, the sound of tortured souls, etc. The only thing he didn't expect was that there was a pole dance pole thingy and a building that looked demonic I guess. Just Imagine that place Lil nasx twerked for lucifer. But he also noticed something different about his body, he was in his old body and the clothes that he wore before his death.
Acedia or I should probably say Marc now didn't have anything else to do so he just walked straight up into the building through the main entrance. The sight that awaited him after going through the entrance was magnificent.
There was a long throne room, beautifully decorated with small lave falls, gold, precious-looking gems, and demonic-looking armors standing on armor stands. The thing that stand out the most though was a throne made out of bones. On top of the throne sat the former "Acedia". That looked him in the eyes and the moment he opened his mouth to say a cool line Marc interrupted him: "Arent you the fucker who pushed me?"
Acedia just screamed in retaliation: "Arent you the fucker who killed me!"
Marc looked at him with pity and said: "Sorry dude it wasn't my intention, I was pretty stressed out and punched you without thinking about the consequences."
Acedia replied to that: "Bro, I understand that. It is also how I became the sin of sloth. I also pushed the "Acedia" before me down from heaven.My name before that was Andy btw."
Marc looked at him surprised and said: "Wait for real?"
Andy said with a smile: "Yep, do you wanna know why I shoved you or more importantly how one of the seven deadly sins died from such little height." Marc looked at him with a questioning gaze so Andy continued "Dude, you know heaven is pretty high up, but I am...no I was the sin of sloth it should have been impossible to die from falling. But we will return to that later. I will now explain to you what you are, what you can do, and what you should do in the future."
Marc could do nothing but look confused, in his mind there was so much information being processed.
Andy of course realized that and laughed his ass off: "What are you fucking dumb, the weird part is about to come, dude!!! MUAHAHAHAHA!"
Marc got a little enraged a replied: "What is up with that laugh, is your father your uncle?"
Andy looked completely shocked: "How do you know that?"
Marc: "_"
Andy: "_" "Oh that was a joke, that's awkward"
Creation is hard, cheer me up!
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