BigChungus8675309

dollars after grand is pointless you could say four grand and people would know what you meant

this feels like it was written by a virgin

umm not in the states it isn't

now this is a damned good read 10/10 solid writing great editing follows the story just enough to keep it legit I look forward to more

i think they died or something as long as its been

jesus I am struggling to read this any more like holy shit the words are english but it was for sure made in china

in my mind I am reading Hesk with Tim Curry's voice from rocky horror picture show

why is he talking about being reincarnated with him? isnt it supposed to be a secret ?

this is how you can tell it was written by someone not american they think we only eat sandwiches and lamb chops

Could be a great story but the author obviously hasn't watched yellowstone and tries to add in some political racial shit that doesn't need to be in it can't keep his story straight in some places its a bit all over honestly and needs some major editing and for them to actually watch yellowstone