robert_wylie

thats lame. always baffles me why at least 50% of fanfics have some kind of shitty solo leveling army building power instead of just being individually strong

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nothing wrong with liking it... i think its dogshit, but if you like it have fun

i feel like the point of him getting OFA is because shit like tactics can be trained, whereas the courage/spirit to save someone despite knowing you will probably die is harder to find/cultivate. not saying there wouldnt be a million better candidates if all might bothered to look, but thats the gist of why he was chosen.

i really liked another fanfic by this author, but this is very clearly AI generated slop with little to zero human editing. ch51 shows this best when he talks to his sons, the primarchs. its obvious well before that, but chapter 51 just absolutely proves there was zero human input or editing in this fanfic. in 53 chapters i read, the emperor only speaks in speeches, as if lecturing literally everyone he talks to. he breaks the 4th wall sometimes (ch51), and there are many chapters where he just repeats himself over and over.. probably one of the worst things ive ever read

this reads far too much like ai slop

a crack fic on steroids. instantly masters haki (he literally just masters in instantly, he uses it once, and then it instantly starts progressing to full mastery faster than he can be taught) he has the arms-arms fruit, which can apparently mimic all zanpakuto.. cant see the purpose of this honestly, it will only take like an hour to two of training to become to strongest person in the one piece universe.

for god sake dont give him everything. just find a path to focus on, its never fun reading about these "i can do everything and still be that best at everything i do" characters

read 40 chapters. he goes to hogwarts, and becomes a strict teacher. thats it. literally nothing else happened in 40 chapters. no first person thoughts how what he wants or any purpose. he is just a plain, boring teacher. whoever spent the time of day to write this must be utterly insane

"explore the bigotry in the Wizard World and the implications of the protagonist being black" pretty sure its made clear in the books that wizards dont give a shit about race or skin colour. there are obvious parallels like blood purity and species prejudice but i cant think of any examples of racism as we know it.