
okuma
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Kitap oku
The story is good and the creativity is there; however, there are also quite a few things lacking. The writing is average and the main character social interaction with others are dull.
A refreshing story with no shortcoming in my opinion.
Ian journey is something I love following.
I really love this story. Ethan is such a kind and selfless wizard i can't help but want to see how his righteous act change the world.
Absolutely perfect~ [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
A great story! However although it's but a minor detail I'd like to point out that Sakayanagi behaviour of turning to her father for information doesn't align with how she would really act .In my humble opinion she is a prideful girl who'd despise doing such thing. Apart that it's a really refreshing and interesting story.
Really good story. I love Sterling interactions with his friends especially with Terry. The story feel wholesome and the plot is great.
This story is really great. I like the fact the guy isn't trying to keep the plotline and rest true true to himself from start to finish.
The story is great. I never end up bored when I read it, in fact my siblings sometimes give me funny looks when I end up laughing because of the interactions between the characters. I really like the friendly interactions between Shirogane and the MC.
I just love this fanfic, it's very original and the MC is just so awesome.[img=update][img=update][img=update]