JustTheAverageKen

please do defend it. because what is the goddamn point of having a narrative about replacing an already superpowered character and then adding a system that allows that character to basically be a power switcher? it's pure and stupid and simple wish fulfillment fantasy that you might as well get from an original piece of work rather than from a barely coherent fanfic

they are human-like enough to be indistinguishable from one. so having adrenaline isn't that much of a surprise

goddamn man. you should write one about being a Cadian Guardsman in WH40K or something. you clearly know what you're doing here

OP is good, but putting NO weakness at all makes it all such a boring concept and makes it an eventual nightmare to keep interest, both as a reader and writer

he could always just give V to that one squid lady and see if that helps her gain a human form or something. also, it wouldn't be a bad idea to have Deep get some V1 in him for some real power boost and maybe an additional power like hydrokinesis or something

Matt as in...Matthew Grayson?

oh yeah, right. the special dimension thing with the gamer ability. Damn it's been so long since I've stopped reading that particular series

that doesn't make sense. so why is doing all this then?

I am amazed that the Tyranid Hivemind didn't send a freaking armada to stop what you are doing to its poor...soldiers

He won't be reaching Cadia anytime soon