Yui_Kanegawa

This book is a gripping read that will resonate with fans of the genre. With its dynamic storytelling, well-rounded characters, and immersive world-building, this book is bound to make a lasting impression on readers who enjoy thrilling fantasy adventures.

Wait.......So, Sohel's a dad Now?? What the.............. Can't finish that sentence. Anyway, great ending to a great novel. Can't wait to read more about Luna's dad.

This chapter feels somewhat different. Does the same author really write it?

Isn't the story getting a bit too dark for a PG-13 rated novel

The story has potential, it lacks a lot of correction and editing work, not so much because it is poorly written and the line of action cannot be followed, but because it detracts from the rest of the positive things such as the plot. Perhaps lengthening the chapters a little more by introducing some more situational descriptions would also enrich the text. Good job