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He's got some strange problems. I can understand him, but how did he live in the last world? In the last world, he reached the so-called peak and continued to live until the atomic bombs exploded. So what's stopping him from continuing to live? And how did he not notice that if he could enter another world, he could enter a third world?

I like it. I don't know why I like it, because I'm really annoyed by this work. The main character is overly dramatic about his disability. Compared to Caster, who burns his life away by using his power, and Nefis, who feels the pain of burning by using her fire, his disability is a fairy tale, a real freebie. Then the main character is schizoid, one moment he's normal, the next he's a whiner and a crybaby, and then he becomes a badass, only to become a traumatized psycho. It doesn't help that the author constantly adds one mystery after another, leaving the previous ones unanswered, and I'm not even mentioning the fact that the main character doesn't have a soul core. All of this combined makes me feel like I'm dreaming, and this fanfiction is a dream with a temperature of 40 degrees. I've reached chapter 70. I don't like it, but I keep reading because I like it.

Wow, so now he's stuck in the dream realm forever. It's interesting how Weaver's mask interprets Faram's flaw. Faram's flaw is that the stronger you become, the shorter your life. So, it's the opposite of what it sounds like: "the weaker you become, the longer your life" or "the stronger you become, the longer your life."

Or did he summon a centaur with golden armor and call upon the echo of Gunlug to cover his body?

This is something I didn't expect. But it's not clear whether he summoned an echo and covered it with the echo of Gunluag, or whether he used the echo to transform his body into a centaur's?

I think this can be considered a response to the comments of people who are hoping for Azula to be paired with the main character. The harem itself reduces his chances with her by at least 50%, but Shuki's decision to be the main character in the harem reduces his chances to a near-zero 1%.

I agree with you. When I saw his flaw, I thought it was the end, but after calming down, I also came up with the idea of pushing the opponent to the brink. Alternatively, you could create a condition where the opponent simply cannot survive, such as spraying poison or heating the surrounding area to a point where the opponent cannot live. Technically, the opponents would not be killed by the opponent, but rather by the environment being incompatible with life.

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