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bad move if anyone tried this, rick is a burden on any group and in the beginning a liability to include you do not have the supplies that he requires to wake up. I recently found this out but apparently a doctor and one nurse was taking care of Rick when he was in the coma being one of the few patients still alive due to operation cobalt.

the writing is ok, it doesn't seem to be ai. the character development is mid (chinese man), the story is ass in my opinion with no common theme or goal except maybe becoming stronger. this was advertised as HIGHIQ the mc is 100% not a plotter or manipulator. he doesnt think things fully through

dude think of it like this, you have the main story and then side stories. this was a side story that still exists within the naruto world

you've proven my point, danzo didnt do it yet he was hungry for any power he could gain. Hiruzen is the only example shown in naruto meaning there was something up with hiruzen for a special talent. Even if what you say is correct, hiruzen had an affinity for all except space time elements. This means its easier for him to master them all and he is believed to have mastered it in his 20s to 30s during his prime

nah ur wrong bro, the natural energy is a hard counter to the otutsukis as they cant absorb it and he would be able to have limitless natural energy as he's drawing upon the planet. It would be different if he were dragged into her dimensions tho

You are running into the same problem as another author, he doesnt use tags which is something you and he needs to do. It will gain traction the more people find it but just spam tags until you get more people. This novel is very very lowk right now

diamonds originally were considered worthless only during the 20th century did they become popular

Just so you know, Fujitora is blind so he developed it in that direction but he can only sense someone's aura aka their emotions as they are going through them and is only able to recognize them once they meet

great chapter, what I mean is like how you put on advanced technology for a tag. Use HighIQ as a tag or something you believe would attract more people that fits with the story. This is honestly a bad example but one nonetheless: its like how a one piece story has that as a tag alongside a naruto tag. ( Whatever attracts people that again fits with the story you should try like kingdombuilding