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_Olly_

_Olly_

Lv15
2022-02-10 KatıldıGermany
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  • _Olly_
    _Olly_2 months ago
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    Sad to see this novel ending so ubruptly. I really liked it and I looked forward to new chapters every day.

  • _Olly_
    _Olly_2 months ago
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    I was really pleasantly surprised by this novel. As of chapter 140, the plot pacing is excellent, with a good alternation between well-written fight scenes, wholesome moments between the main characters and “relaxation” in the outside world, never spending too much or too little time on each. Character design for now has been done well, feeling real and not like insane portrayals of some clichéd characteristic. Not so much has been disclosed about world building yet (especially for the game world), but it seems promising at least. Writing quality has been excellent as well. If I had to nitpick, the only issue I have with the novel is that it makes no sense for the ultra-rich portrayed in the novel to attend the same university as the super poor on a completely polluted planet, when some of them are literally owners of paradise-like planets. I understand that it is necessary for the main characters to have some real-life connection, but I feel like it could have been done a little differently. That aside, I highly recommend this novel to anyone who is looking for a fresh story and I hope the author keeps up the good work.

  • _Olly_
    _Olly_5 months ago
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    Author, Fade was fighting the gray-robed man as well. Also, as one of the other users commented as well, I think everybody would agree an already edited chapter published later is better than a non-edited chapter released on time. If you take it a bit easier it would likely be better for you as well :) Thanks for the chapter

  • _Olly_
    _Olly_6 months ago
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    A novel not overly-complicated but well-written, with a good pacing, making it a fun and entertaining read. It is not revolutionary in any way, but all the elements of the novel fit together well. Recommended if you are looking for something outside the power/harem fantasies always so common on this platform.

  • _Olly_
    _Olly_6 months ago
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    I really recommend the novel. While not a novel concept, the story feels fresh and is well told and developed. I’ll go morenin detail point by point: - World Building Really well done, the world feels alive with different factions, each with their interests and interacting accordingly - Character design/development This is also well done. Most of the main characters have defined personalities reflecting their actions. Character development at the moment is mostly done for MC, but is also well done. - Plot While the reincarnated, rune-using MC plot is not something new, I have really been enjoying the plot of this novel. It has a great progression with many gripping moments. - Pacing Maybe the only weak point of the novel. While chapters almost always have interesing content without feeling reduntant or like fillers, I sometimes wished the plot progressed a little faster. Seriously, the MC is still at a very low level and considering the plot of the newest arc (chapter 400+), this is likely not going to change for a while. - Power ranking is clear and well definen. Overall, if you are undecided whether ti read the novel or not, I recommend to pick it up. As a side note for author, 1500 coins for 20 privilege chapters is way too much.

  • _Olly_
    _Olly_6 months ago
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    “I do not fight humans”. Set up as seemingly one of the core principles of the MC, he immediately proceeds to betray it a few days later for money. Sorry, but this is just terribly inconsistent and not good writing

  • _Olly_
    _Olly_6 months ago
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

  • _Olly_
    _Olly_7 months ago
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

  • _Olly_
    _Olly_8 months ago
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    Having stacked chapters for almost a month, I read all these chapters with different points of view all at once and I quite enjoyed it, but I could see myself getting frustrated if I were to read only two chapters per day

  • _Olly_
    _Olly_a year ago
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    I’ve seen quite a few reviewers giving a bad review after stopping to read around chapter 15, as there is a classical chinese faceslapping scene. Fortunately that is the only scene of this kind in the novel and I recommend to read further. It was in fact a quite nice piece of character development for the MC, which, surprisingly for a chinese novel, is quite grounded and acts logically. I enjoyed the story development of the story, which has a nice pace (maybe slightly slow at times) and is not over the top. World building also feels well done and provides a good understanding of factions and their relataionships. Again surprisingly for a chinese novel there is no racism or extreme nationalism, though maybe some patriotism. While the story is supposed to be sci-fi with some fantasy elements, the technology definitely leans more towards magic and fantasy. While this may differ for you, I didn’t mind much. I recommend you give this novel a try and I will definitely continue reading unless the story takes a turn for the worst. As anote for the translator, more than 2000 coins for Privilege of 25 chapters of a translation is simply too much