JokerJay75

isn't it still too early for thor

I hate this option

decent but again there's mistakes like double spaces between words. sometimes you forget to put quotation marks to show when someone is speaking. you also forget to put some words in the sentence and other times you use the wrong words in the sentence.

decent chapter but a few mistakes here and there. could use some improvement in writing.

huh why would he cover his other eye?

the second half of the the chapter is confusing

ugh I'm disappointed.

is this a translation or a rewrite? because I seen a story similar to this where mc has the power to go to different universe's and the first person they reincarnate is miko. I don't want her to be in the peerage.