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Very edgy I see. The first paragraph also reminded me of this person

Bu adam bot sakın yapma

NONONONO! WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT!

Hi! The author here. Thanks for your review! I also want to keep up with it and have many chapters planned in my head but unfortunately, I couldn't find the time to write them down due to my school. I will absolutely continue when I get the chance. Also about Scripture, it doesn't make one ascend, but rather allows a person to better understand themselves with the views of modern understandings of psychology. Rather, it gives a new perspective for the person to view themselves in, as the cultivation world of understanding of the psyche is mystical. With this, the practitioner will have a higher chance of achieving the Birth of Self Realm. I think I should've explained it better, as it will make it seem really forced. But I think this is not the worst offender. That title goes to when he strengthened his Dao Heart. I really want to rewrite the first chapters, especially that part. I cringed when I read that part again when I was re-posting this novel. Now to my defence, I was really and I mean really had just started writing, and it showed. I'm still a newbie, but since then I have written at least 100 chapters of content for my two books. I would say I got slightly better. Too much happened in those chapters without much weight, no connection to the viewer and no stakes. I also didn't have a clear view of what I was going to do with the story that much, since I had just started writing out of boredom. Now I have a clear goal and settled out the general layout, what I'm having trouble with is filling the gaps.

Not as much as Richard "D*ck" Grayson

Wish I could add its sound effect lol

Shh

Some manhuas also have character introduction pages. I wrote that thinking like that, with an extensive one. But I guess I forgot to include it.

lol idk how I missed that one

It's a plot point.