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WeepingCarp

WeepingCarp

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I hate authors that write stupid ideas in a good novel

2021-03-04 KatıldıAscension Island
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The Beggar Prince of Crimson

Set in a world were true virtual reality has just been released for a game named Laurel. Our young protagonist excitedly jumps at the opportunity to try it. He embarks into this new world, but after a short gaming session, another player leads him to his death. Unfortunately, his Vr device is defective and fries his brain, trapping his mind in the servers of Laurel. But instead of roaming onto eternity, his virtual body is brought back through a monster's piercing fangs giving his body new life as an undead bloodseeker. Follow the young Etsuko as he tries to survive in this cruel world and fit in this new vampiric hierarchy. The first chapter is information packed as I tried to capture the experience of jumping in a new world\game! I made the vampire race supernatural, no "You cant enter unless I invite you". You'll find out more if you read it but weaknesses like that don't make sense. So they aren't included. Ill also try to find logical reasons for certain things, like why they drink blood and why silver hurts them. Feedback would be appreciated as this is my first written novel!

WeepingCarp · Games
2 Chs