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why the name chang from natsuki to xia mu?? the name xia mu = natsuki??could you chang xia mu to natsuki ist sound better

chapter 13 to 18 are missing , could u upload them plz

where ar chapters 13 to 15??

oh this storyis so great i love it. plz write more chaps

could you write a warhammer 40k story plz from the pespective of a humane civilien to space marine (if you do plz dont use one of the normal chapters, use some like the last loyalist war groups of theiron warriors ). i realy liked your star wars story, it was a great read and i reread it often. srry for spelling mistakes englisch is not my motherlanguage.

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will u comtimue this story ?

the names are partly wrong and i can not follow the story , because of wrong translation or spelling . the start was great but it got bad after chapter 17 .

it is a greagte chapter and i hope zou can hold on to this quallity until the last chapter.