LastGod

....... lack of studiousness???? hufflepuff. He reads and studies everything.

father????

......careful a couple of mistakes and i can correct them in my head but that get annoying the 10th time in 10 chapters.

dont like weak mc 😒 dont like weak system

nice 👍

Its okay but the humor.... if you call it that is very bad. Its toddler level funny. Trying to hard to be a meme with zero self awareness of what it actually is. The powers are cool, mc seems..... okay, if he calms the fuk down eventually. But this didnt hook me in the first chapter. Maybe ill find this again when im more patient.

as long as they dont have thier own pov i dont mind im traumatized from wuxia where it 100 chapters of a clone of the mc re-cultivating so the real body can meditate on the experience 😆🤣😂😹

..... i HATE clones

First chapter could have been half as long and said twice as much. But AI makes shit harder then it needs to be. AI can write books but fanfic is meant to be simpler, faster, fun. This is boring, slow, and convoluted.

Seem pretty good i just dont like his powers but everyone should read it see if its for them good writing.