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Item: Rick and Morty: Jerry Prime
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I'm glad to see another "rick and morty" fanfiction on Webnovel. I really don't understand why there isn't more. Anyway, as for this novel, it's pretty good and readable. The only thing I see as a problem is the too many repetitive monologues and unnecessary repetition of paragraphs of events. It's like they just struggled to complete the word count.

Rick and Morty: Jerry Prime

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Also, jery should have been discovered faster. You can tell how obsessed Rick is with details and his personal space from the episode where he goes to another planet to shit in the toilet.

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Thanks for the feedback, Jerry got discovered later because his Rick, is not the Rick we know. It's a dumber Rick who was over arrogant.

ReaderCat:Also, jery should have been discovered faster. You can tell how obsessed Rick is with details and his personal space from the episode where he goes to another planet to shit in the toilet.
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