Review Detail of Hibari in Fantasy Realm - Harem - One Piece - Naruto - Harry Potter - HxH - SW

The story was difficult to read the first chapters, but the quality goes up quickly goes up! Often finding myself laugh at scenes and appreciate the ideas behind the book. I like where it is going and it seems the author goes back to earlier chapters to correct the earlier mistakes so I give it my best review as it has what I like