Item: Veilbound Secrets: The Oath Bearer's Curse
Rating: 5

JosephJoesterLv22mth

2024-09-11 02:01

Can't say much, only 7 chapters out so far. But from the little available, I can say it's a very good start. Goodluck to the author, looking forward to more

Veilbound Secrets: The Oath Bearer's Curse

TheEternalSky

5.0

33 Chs

Liked by 3 people

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TheEternalSkyAuthor

Thank you for the review, I hope you continue enjoying the rest of the story.

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As the author, I'm naturally inclined to give my own novel 5 stars, but I understand that only you, the readers, can truly decide if it lives up to that. I encourage you to dive into the story, form your own opinions, and share your thoughts. While the pace starts slow, it gradually picks up momentum after the first few chapters, so I hope you'll stick around to experience the unfolding journey. Your feedback is invaluable, and I'm always here to answer any questions you have. Happy reading, and I hope you enjoy the journey!

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