Review Detail of Mr_O_ in My Werewolf's Slayer System

This review is based on reading 10 chapters. I can say that the story has a good pace, especially in the introduction of the protagonist, Jake. His motivation for joining the academy is well developed and connects with the reader by showing a genuine emotional struggle due to the loss of his parents. The action elements, like the training fights and the level system, are well constructed and add a dynamic layer to Jake's progress. Some aspects that could improve: Some concepts could be explained more clearly, such as the level system and the backstory of the wolves. With a bit more detail and refinement, these aspects could enhance the overall reading experience. In summary, it’s an interesting story with clear potential, but there’s room for improvement in the development of secondary characters and the structure of interactions. I hope it keeps getting better ;)