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Peyalll
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Please try to write your pronoun rightly ....in here you will see you write they instead his..... overall good ... keep up the good work... keep on updating and good luck

One Piece: I'm Celestial Dragon

Musouka

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Musouka
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ok thanks for your advice

PizzaStopsTime
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In a third person POV using they/their is fine since it can refer to one person