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SirWolfT1
SirWolfT1Lv152mth
2024-08-24 01:34

so far so good, tho i feel the characters lack soul and personality besides the roles they play or are told to play, as well as, it feels like it has a starting of character arcs but hasn't gotten the time to develop. The story could benefit from having a time and date, like when it is set, which era/century, what world event is happening at the time in the human world etc.

Blood And Briars

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The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

The action scenes also feel bland almost like turn-based games like "the vulvolturi attacked but then retreated severely wounded" or something like that

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Ignavia_Ursa
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This is good. I want more. Gimme, gimme, gimme.

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Savage_C00KIE
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I really like what I'm reading so far. I do have one question though...Does she have fangs like a traditional vampire? I'm asking because 1. it would lame of she doesn't, and 2. I read somewhere that Twilight vampires don't have fangs.

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Doxombre
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Overall, the story isn't bad. The plot progresses quickly, and the MC has to flee her new abode after attracting the attention of some evil group. Everything was fine, although I did find the dialogue a bit boring. Its a bit too "old timey" for my taste, and they genuinely act like vampires in some "mysterious movie" that it almost seems like a funny joke to me. I would have kept reading if the author didn't suddenly say they wanted to make it into a harem. I appreciate the announcement, but I wished they had tagged it. I'm quite frankly sick of the number of harem stories in everything nowadays. It seems my endeavor in reading this, too, was a waste of time. How unfortunate.

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