Review Detail of robert_8164 in The extermination of my clan is imminent, but I am not an Uchiha

decent, but the translator or author needs to kink out some grammatical issues. for instance, the most obvious mistake was when the shinobi were attacking they would yell "go dead" as if to say "Die!" to their enemy, a small but obvious mistake that breaks immersion. other than that, its pretty good.