Review Detail of _Wessix4Ever in Buffy: Self insert

the fic has some issues key of which is how quickly the mc integrates himself in the group while trying to be mysterious and failing at it. but while failing the story likes to refer to him as mysterious for some reason and the characters have odd moments as a result like people thinking he's hiding things after exchanging 10 words with the mc. it's just awkward and is the totality of the mcs character