The MC just absolutely ruins the otherwise perfectly solid 4/5-4.5/5 fic his personality is just to garbage to even consider the fic worthwhile far too childish and incompetent it's like reading the old Chuuni MC fics from the early 2010's where every MC needed to be Edgy instead nowdays it's braindead half written MC's who think with their lower head only and that just completely and utterly fail to gain any interest or traction this fic in it's current state is absolute garbage needs a rewrite and a MC the readers could actually get interested in not the utter waste the MC is now the writing is good the updates solid and it's Marvel so it's a good world to write about but nah can't see any way shape or form for me to ever want to support this fic don't waste your time there's better Smut fics with Neutral or Evil MC's where the MC is actually interesting or understandable never understood why Authors want to ruin their own fics like this it's a waste of time
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My guy has never heard of something called character development (which has happened now btw, patience is a virtue)
