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the honest review is this fic literally just harem in marvel, even though the story starts with clear background of MC, it's started to go sideways with MJ and Gwen when the story started to get interesting behold a wild carol danver came and the MC start to flirt. This fic just felt like it's going nowhere.
Marvel: I Have A Super USB Drive
OneArmedImmortal
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flirting is not a crime and I understand the situation of MJ and Gwen as the right before the USB being used you already wrote the relationship between them, but it is annoying for the reader when you throw the scene of carol in there right when the MC want to explore the power or thing he can get from the USB. And also i think that the star that i give appropriate for the background story, writing quality, and character background. The only thing that i don't like is the flow of the story get interrupted by the relationship that you want the MC to have.
OneArmedImmortal:casual flirting nowadays is a crime I see... touch some grass and the novel's not harem jus' because of the existence of female side characters... Really can't blame you tho since most Marvel fics use both MJ n Gwen as harem templates